Black Poetry : Offering of Love

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  1. AACOOLDRE

    AACOOLDRE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Offering for Love

    You make me happy
    You make me smile
    Can’t get you out of my mind
    Not even for a little while

    Can’t wait until I kiss you
    And I surely do miss you
    Grant me please just one wish
    Lay your body on my clay dish

    I want to make love
    Life is more than kicking boots
    If I call you on the telephone tonight
    Just give one good old hoot

    I need your love
    I need your affection
    I like you just the way you are
    Your curves and your complexion

    Give me the time
    And give me the chance
    My erection is awaiting
    The party of our romance
     
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    Alright now, AACOOLDRE, somebody got you jonesin',
    some lucky lady will be the recipient of the love you have to offer:)

    Beautiful, harmonic flow here. Flow on poet. Do ya thang!
     
  3. GHETTOAMBITION

    GHETTOAMBITION Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yo that was beautiful, i was really feelin yo flow my bratha, and i do think she will give u all the tyme u need...lol so flo on wit nonstop
    dis yo sista jus showin sum luv

    blackluv and bp
     
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    AACOOLDRE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Your both correct
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    wow that was tyte .....man bring some mo of that poetic scribe
     
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    :jumping: Allright now! I hear you. I like this piece a lot. Flo on Poet.
     
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