Black Poetry : off the head...raw emotion

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  1. MiztikalDreams

    MiztikalDreams Member MEMBER

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    As I sit at this computer, cup of Henn in my hand
    All I can think about is how I did all I could for this man
    And what do I get in return

    Another lonely night at home
    in the streets, he roams

    then calls me out like i was in the wrong

    all i wanted was time
    time to chill wit my boo
    but his time no, his frat is what he choosed

    so what am i to do
    but sit and ponder and realize the truth
    that once again i fell for lies
    once again i played myself for you

    that seems to be the theme
    playin seems to be the game
    in the end all i ever was, was just another name

    so what's a girl to do
    as i stare at the glass in my hand
    oh well
    take a drink
    and hope the bed is where i land
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    change gonna come after ya wake up !

    sober up and drop dat zero and get ya self a hero

    very nice piece
     
  3. SmoovVerbiage

    SmoovVerbiage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Many of us find ourselves at that same crossroad, when choosing "me" is a must, because "we" ain't happy together anymore

    Nicely put Rich

    Nicely expressed Miztkal.

    Nice name too.


    Coco:)
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    We hope that things will change, especially if we have feelings for a person, but eventually, that hurt causes us to look within and to make changes for self. Many have walked down this road, liked the way you posed this.
     
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