Black Poetry : Off Tha Top of My Head

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  1. Masai

    Masai Member MEMBER

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    I'm hearing seven's
    It's close to eleven and this aint heaven
    ...should've stayed my behind at home
    my cash flow's gettin' ...low
    Soon I'll have nowhere to go in this city of big lights
    ...this aint no place for the money tight

    Aww naw, I lost again.
    I best begin to walk my *ss up out of this den
    ...of thieves. Oh po' is me. It's hard to believe,
    I came here with money.

    "Say Cheese," the photographer said.
    He's takin' pictures. ...face jus' turned red.
    I said to him, "Do you see this ring?"
    "It'll be bloody in a minute, ...you naw mean."
    He said, "Wait sir." "Yo' plight could make green."
    "I'm takin' pictures for the Loser's Magazine."

    "Well cool," I said. I just got a face lift.
    ...might as well share with the world, this gift.
    Maybe I'll get a modeling contract. I could be famous.
    ...who am I kiddin'? ...I must be wasted.
     
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    Haaaaay Masai ... nice work off the top!
     
  3. poeticdelight

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    i read this a minute ago

    tyte poet

    peace
     
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    Nice my brotha...Keep this flow coming.
     
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    ya top mental is working coz
    dis be tyght flow head on!
     
  6. Masai

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    You kids are too kind.
    Like the sweet nectar from a vine,
    it stimulates my mind.

    Now, I'm feeling fine.
    This is God's design
    ...for me to be hear
    ...flowing thru a new year
    ...takin' notes from my peers

    Please keep me in yo' prayers
    I want to remain here
    ...still twistin' my hair
    ...settling into my new lair.
     
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    thepoetsean Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice words coz. keep em comin'
     
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