Black Poetry : off my head....for u...

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by daroc, Jun 18, 2004.

  1. daroc

    daroc Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    off my head.....for u...


    i remeber when i didnt like u
    and look how far we've come
    i cant stop lovin u
    u came into my life when i was lost
    and yet i left u lost
    i couldnt tell u the truth
    b/c that was something i knew i couldnt do
    so insted i lied and told u that it wasnt u
    our relatoiship changed
    for the worse
    and i couldnt take anymore
    but look how far we've come
    i love u so much
    ur one of my best friends- close to # one
    i cant imagine life without u
    what whould i do
    ur there when others are not
    u make me laugh when im down
    i call u everyday never ending the conversation wit a frown
    o how i love u
    its funny tho
    cuz u got a gurl
    and its not me
    but i play that role so easily
    i dont deny my feeling for u
    and u keep givin me excuse after excuse
    but there is nothing that i can do
    i love u too much to say goodbye
    my heart would always cry
    i did that once
    and paid the price
    of u not being in my life
    we past it now
    but its always gonna remain
    and things will never be the same
    but thats good- cuz they have only gotten betta
    i love u more wit a desire to take any challenge
    even tho we r not togetha
    im not ur gurl but i kno what my place is in ur heart
    im right next to where love for ur mom would start
    i kno where i am in ur heart
    and thats not going anywhere
    whether she stays or leaves
    ur love for me will always be
    thats makes my day to kno it wont leave
    cuz i always have u in times of need
    i cant thank u enough for continuing to be by my side
    even when i stepped all over ur heart
    walked away and came back- and u still love me
    i done told u things others dont kno
    and u still forgive and love me
    u still love me
    knowing that keeps me safe
    it keeps me calm
    keeps me here
    knowin that ur love for me still exist
    after all ive done to help it diappear
    im sorry baby
    for hurtin u
    i didnt mean to cut rite threw
    i didnt intend to
    bruise ur love for me
    and ur heart too
    i thought i was playin it safe by lyin to u
    and walking away
    but instead i messed up and i pay everyday
    when i think about me not being with u
    i wan to cry
    tears of pain and happiness
    wishin i was there
    the gurl u were lovin at night
    thinkin about
    the gurl u hold tyte
    but im happy im still in ur life
    still friends
    and one day
    one day
    ima be ur wife
    with no worries
    i already kno
    and if it dont happen the ima still be here
    waiting
    wanting
    hoping
    missing
    wishing
    for u.............
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    whewwww!!
    ya heart is deep
    this was very nicely done
     
  3. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sounds like a deep love, a love of friendship for sure, and maybe, more...it could happen. Keep the flows coming.
     
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    yeah
    very nice poem..feeling the attachment
    and the missing very deep
    flow on...vert nice poem
    Peace~N~Love
    BlueWater:heart:
     
  5. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    the emotion in this piece...
    just poured like a wild river...
    Heartfelt...
    flow on poet...
     
  6. daroc

    daroc Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanx yall
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    emotions flowin diggin ya flow
    thanks for sharing...Angel
     
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