Black Poetry : off my chest

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by tzevi1278, Dec 14, 2004.

  1. tzevi1278

    tzevi1278 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Now let’s be real, I know I never speak how I feel
    But my rhymes will, just listen to the thoughts they revel

    Hey love, there’s some things I gotta say to you
    First of all, I wanna tell you that you’re beautiful
    And that my love for you ascends conscience magnitudes
    I wanna do for you the things only God’s can do
    Defy the odd for you, let down all my guards for you
    This **** is hard to do, or so I make it seem
    Lately when I write you seem to dominate my themes
    And penetrate my dreams; you’re my constant inspiration
    And the feelings that we share seem consistent with creation
    There’s no degradation or fallacies in our reality
    In actuality, I don’t think you’ve ever sadden me
    I mean we fight from time to time and that’s expected
    But never anything that isn’t easily corrected
    And girl you got a frame that makes a work-of-art ashamed it was erected
    You feel protected when I hold your body next to me
    Physical pedigree like centerfolds in ebony
    You’ll forever be, the woman of my destiny
    Just take the best of me and keep it as your own,
    This microphone’s my only way of draining my dome
    A life’s poem written with the blood of my heart
    I look back and you were always there from the start
    Through thick and thin, thin and thick, rags to riches
    You’re like the golden dove that rose above all the pigeons
    Cultural divisions explain, your exotic features
    And the bond we share makes us both symbiotic creatures
    There’s no way to reach us or any level to attain
    And the illest part about it, is that my shorty feels the same
    And I’ll take the blame, for cultivating such a merger
    Plus I’d do anything to push it forward any further
    Now this is a love story, but not the kind you read in a novel
    The kind of love to lift you in the deepest of sorrow
    The kind to keep you waiting for the light of tomorrow
    I swear to God without you girl, my heart’ll be hollow
    The endless emptiness, a life without my em p ress
    I couldn’t picture this, and never would I figure just
    How much you mean to me, and girl you always seem to be
    Forever there for me, a vision ever heavenly, ever so carefully
    Is how I chose to step to thee, lyrical weaponry flowing at the 1st degree
    With every breathe of me, yearning for your flesh I’m weak
    Deploy discreet techniques, we never have to speak, our thoughts are one, and it’s like our hearts were born in sync
    So it’s to you I say, and in my heart I pray,
    That I’ll always love you girl, until my dying day


    Copyright 2004
    © Kiastar inc. Krate Creations publishing
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    to love is to be loved awesome tyte flow
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    To be one within each other's hearts and minds, sounds like a love of a life time. Endearing flow.
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    What a lovely way to say ..."I love you", and may the feeling last forever and a day...you'll want that extra day.
    Here's to two :hearts2: in sync.
    I like your style of expression, thanks for sharing your joy.
     
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    MADDRAPPER Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    MADD One time me and this boy was in the bed wrestling

    Juicy as hell Breasts hanging bed at best clanging had on a brown gown in dressing

    I was winning in the beginning I was pinning him he roll me over

    I couldn’t pull down my gown my legs flew open my stew smoking smolder

    He fell on top and stuck **** in my hot spot couldn’t go anywhere it

    Was so deep and sweet oh he just went crazy in my gravy bits

    Calling me baby boo and lady poo he jest went crazy didn’t know what

    To say Nothing cum to mind he wouldn’t take it out my pudding
     
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    Leaky103 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    lovely

    That is such a beautiful way to prose your love. I felt every word.
     
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    dnommo Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    strong verse of heartstrings...this is a deep depiction of love, poet...

    respect given...

    one.
     
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    What a beautiful tribute to the one you love!
     
  9. OmoObatala

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    You kind of love

    This is the kind of love I want to live! Thanks for this ...you give me hope to be wrapped in the arms of love to be held in the thought of love!!!!!

    :) I am a fan
     
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    what a righteous flow attributed to wisdom..........
     
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