Black Poetry : Off Limits(exerpt)

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  1. liquyd

    liquyd Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The boy he got
    2 sons, 2 daughters, 2 baby Mamas,
    and one excuse for each one of his dramas,
    No car, No home,
    No connection to a telephone,
    Now he picked YOU to bone.
    Hang on, think clear, keep your Mind,
    Tall Men with Big Feet, One Dozen a Dime.
    Stay strong, this could end in Disaster,
    you can't make a grown man grow up any faster.
    Girlfriend, YES I'm talkin to you,
    this one of those few times I care what you gone do.
    Go 'head, don't say Liquyd didn't say nuthin,
    I ain't gone keep you gettin a little some somethin.
    But watch your back cause it may not look like he be Frontin,
    Until his woman come doin a little ***** huntin.
    I seen this all before infact I've been here once myself,
    He's irresistable to you and everybody else...

    He's OFF LIMITS
    Don't do it Girl
    SHAKE HIM
    Let the next one take him
    Because he got BABIEEEEES
    By the crazy ***** around the corner
    AND SHE WILL CUT YOU.
    He's OFF LIMITS,
    give him the wrong name and then,
    Tell him you ain't even got no pen,
    Tell him you don't really mess with Men
    but you know his girlfriend...
    AND SHE WILL CUT YOU.

    Liquydated Sound/ASCAP
     
  2. PlayWitItPimp05

    PlayWitItPimp05 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    All I can do is :lol:

    But yo, you lettin da truth be told!!!
    I was feelin dis fa sho!

    :heart: :heart: PLAY :heart: :heart:
     
  3. liquyd

    liquyd Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You gotta laugh.......
    Thanks for the ear Pimp!
     
  4. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    lol:) this is tyte girl!!!
     
  5. liquyd

    liquyd Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks Lovely......and so real!
     
  6. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wow, liquyd this reigns in tyteness!
     
  7. the_story

    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :lol: thats right shake his *** it aint worth it!
    tyte flow very tyte flow :)
     
  8. Absolut

    Absolut Active Member MEMBER

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    HE GOT BABIEEES...


    :) I'm feelin ya gurl..
     
  9. SwtT

    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :laugh: this is hilarous...but it is a good warning....flow on poet !!!!
     
  10. liquyd

    liquyd Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks Sage!

    the_story...Word!

    Absolut, I know YOU know... lol;)

    Thank tou SwtT, will do....