Black Poetry : Off da top thinking

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by blakverb, Mar 21, 2001.

  1. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Do I need to be here?
    this land of hedonistic
    pleasure a mere pittance
    for selfish situations
    of satiation

    from two.................****,

    the collision of emotions
    with no airbag blackens
    my third eye confusing
    convoluting the milieu
    for my thinking

    satiation from two.......****,

    sorrow is around the corner
    for a continued carnival of
    pick and choose cause some
    one's going to lose

    maybe
    me...........................

    (c)2001 blakverb off da top thinking
     
  2. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Verb,

    I hear ya brotha but if this type a **** is "off da top thinking"...ya got hella mo skillz yet untapped!!!

    Keep givin' us ya best from "off da top" Blakman!!!

    Respect
    GQ
     
  3. Destee

    Destee destee.com STAFF

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    for real though!
    whew!
    if this is off da top
    what lies within
    is exciting me

    you go BlackVerb
    do yo' thang!

    :heart:

    Destee
     
  4. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Blak~

    You know what they say
    "If you think long, you'll
    choose wrong"!!

    Don't think to long about it,
    just think hard about it...

    I'm sure you'll get to where
    you want/need to be....

    DECISIONS DECISION DECISIONS
    What makes you happy?
     
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    Tantrum Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Blakverb laying it down
    Thanks for the drop poet
    Nice Piece
     
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    Desert Storm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    BIG HUGZ ....! MISSED YA VERB! i know i was gone but there's no place like home... y'all inspire me poetically and creativity man... y'all are back bone poets for me y'all especially of destee fam... taught me everything i know BIG UPS....
    D.S.
     
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