Black Poetry : Off da top thinkin'

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by blakverb, Jan 17, 2002.

  1. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    archaic actualities and adjusted attitudes
    abound / verbal actions ascending
    in anti-astounding profanities have voices
    smelling similar to anuses and altoids
    are needed

    brothers breaths beating because of
    talking bullshyt without brushing
    repercussions of reality rape / rap the
    mind in bloody ruddy tinted throw rugs
    of societal woes /

    sisters silently seeking solace inside
    of sexual sounds / of salty skin singing
    exhalations / expirations excuse exhuberance
    of false emotions by epidermal excavations /
    can you dig it?

    kids kick it cautiously on blocks cause
    crack kills even the nonuser / fiends
    fondling fridays like hells holidays /
    to kiss habits on paydays / and glass
    dycks on Saturdays and Sundays /

    one day all this asinine behavior will
    break beneath the blacktop and grow back
    as roadbumps and we will collectively
    crush the cancer

    (c)2002 blakverb "off da top thinkin"
     
  2. Danilyn

    Danilyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Deep!

    Very nice, blak!:toast:
     
  3. dnommo

    dnommo Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    twin...
    pull...
    me...
    up...
    cuz...
    imma...
    drownin...
    in...
    this...
    mental...
    flood....

    tight scribe poet.

    one.
     
  4. UbZoRbShUn

    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    do i have to say it

    ok then "Off da top ma ***, what happens when you really apply yaself ?"



    One
     
  5. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    In Agreement with Zorb!!!

    This brotha is tight like that!!!

    :peace:
    GQ
     
  6. T

    T Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I think I know...

    (@Zorbshun).... Blak jus EXPLODES tha FLOCK UP!!!!

    Dayum!

    T
     
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