Black Poetry : of YOU

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Afridancr, Jun 5, 2001.

  1. Afridancr

    Afridancr Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Spirit free

    Roaming about the

    Mountains and Sea


    Thoughts of YOU

    C
    ...a
    .......s
    ..........c
    .............a
    ...............d
    ...............i
    .............n
    ..........g

    ...................D
    .................o
    ..............w
    ............N

    the river of

    my Mind


    eMOtions wHippinG

    like...

    a white water raft

    Baptized in the

    ocean of YOU

    Love Captures

    I'm...

    Caught up in the

    Rapture...




    (c)2001EssenceofAminata all rights reserved
     
  2. Natasha

    Natasha Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    love the word play

    I was seeing what I was reading

    take me there sister gurl :p
     
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    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ride the rapids, child...

    let the river dance across the synapses
    and tap...tap...tap
    on the captured heart
    of she who watch
    the river flows...

    NICE PLAY...
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    NOW NOW!!

    I JUST LOVE HOW U WATCHED
    AND AS THE RIVER DANCE BIP BOP
    FLOWS OF FLOODS CAPTURED IN
    YO RAPTURE U DO DES GURL
    NOW I'M ALL IN DES RAPTURE:cool:
     
  5. Afridancr

    Afridancr Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Go head on...

    with your CrEaTiVe SEEEEEELLLLLLFFF! :lol:

    I love this one gurl.....oh it speaks so loudly ~
    Flow the love & share for all to read...this
    piece is SUPERFANTASTICALLY Tight!!


    One.
     
  7. Afridancr

    Afridancr Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    N2...

    humbly:eek: I thank you! This was one of those out of the blue 'peaces'. I really don't know what inspired this. Maybe my deep desire and longing to love (someone).

    ~waiting~
     
  8. DymePlaya2g

    DymePlaya2g Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i heard it...

    "baptized in the ocean of you..." (((shaking head))) that was deep...LOVED IT LOVED Luh-huhved it!

    DP2G
     
  9. wildflower7

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    this flowed...

    so easy. i loved it.
    thank you.
    -7 :spinstar:
     
  10. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Queen AFRI....

    this peace/peace made me breeeeathe easy.

    i lovedid it. :)

    MissinYaMuch. :)
    SunShyne~