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Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by jazzymoonchild, Jun 7, 2004.

  1. jazzymoonchild

    jazzymoonchild Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I barely know you
    yet, you caress my eardrums
    with your voice

    As I hear it,
    slowly I am teased
    with thoughts of you

    Eased into your world
    wishing I could see you
    as your lips form
    every delicious word
    that comes from your mouth

    I wonder about you
    and what you think of me
    what you feel
    when our voices dance


    jazzymoonchild, copyright@ 2000
     
  2. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Very nice flow...sounds like it's love in the air. Keep scribing poet your work is good.
     
  3. jazzymoonchild

    jazzymoonchild Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :bowdown: Thank you Queen for the love and compliment. I love your flows, so this is big for me.
     
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    very warm flow from within
    nice release
     
  5. jazzymoonchild

    jazzymoonchild Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks again Angel
     
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    :driveby: Wow sumbody don wispered sewwt nothings into this poem, nice drop jazzy. Keep posting :grouphug:
     
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    Yes, the things a voice can do to you...this had such an easy feel to it.
     
  8. deepy

    deepy going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    ah when you can hear it..
    feel it...
    know...something...know...
    through sound/word/energy..
    really nice piece...
    thanks..
     
  9. jazzymoonchild

    jazzymoonchild Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :grouphug: :grouphug:

    Python - thank you, I think I am comfortable now! I love it here

    Watz - many, many thanks. I'm glad you could feel it

    Deepy - I am humbled, thank you for showing me love....
     
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    ~~when our voices dance~~~
    wow...
    the mystery of an unknown person
    by whom you are intrigued...
    such an air of excitement woven
    into this peace...

    excellent scribe...
     
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