Black Poetry : Of the World -pt 4 Vanity's Insanity

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  1. PositiveMindset

    PositiveMindset Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'm the finest thing that ever walked on dry land.
    I'm the possession that's fought over by any straight man.
    Even women look me up & down cuz they're jealous of my beauty.
    I've sashayed past kissin' couples & made them start feuding.

    I get my hair & nails done so much that I have my own private beautician.
    I can speak with a soft voice in a loud crowd & I'd still make dude's listen.
    It takes me a while 2 get ready just 2 go down the street
    Cuz I want 2 make an impact on anyone that I meet.

    I've got beauty just coursing thru my veins...
    I've even got an extraordinarily attractive DNA...
    So all my offspring are model material.
    My clothes have 2 be top of the line name brand.
    From the top of my head 2 the tip of my toes has 2 amount 2 at least a grand.

    I can't be around anyone that doesn't look half as good as me.
    I guess my daddy knew what he was doing when he named me Vanity.
     
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    Tight!

    Tis was a str8 head banger ! :hammer: I loved it. Vanity is a strenght as wel a a weakness! :peace:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    dis was a heavy bangger and smasher too
    da flow is off da hook whoaaaaaaaaaaaa!!!!
     
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    wooo this was str8 off it...
    nice drop...:angel1:
     
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    Say it Brother...

    LOUD & CLEAR...

    Your messages are so powerful!

    I just love it!
     
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    Positive my brotha you are the :bomb:
    There is a line between taking pride in ones self and vanity and knowing the difference is valuable wisdom indeed
    Some become so engrossed in their own vanity that they realize all too late that there is nothing left to be vain about...speak on my brotha
     
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    Point taken, some folks so full of themselves there's no room for anything else.
     
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    you are an observer for sure
    this is tight
    Peace
     
  9. PositiveMindset

    PositiveMindset Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    caramel, true indeed, thanks 4 the read.

    $$ , mzblk, & angelic thank U completely 4 the feel.

    triniti, say it again loud so everyone can hear. Thank U, my sister.

    watzinaname, that is oh so true & very sad. Thank U 4 the words.

    Blue, the Almighty gave me 2 eyes, 2 ears & 1 mouth so I can see & hear more than I speak.
    I only wish that more of my people believe the same. Thank U.
     
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