Black Poetry : Of Sand and Surf

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Heartbeat, Sep 17, 2001.

  1. Heartbeat

    Heartbeat Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Walks along the waters edge
    The western tide returns to sea
    Bonded in friendship
    Pure like the wind blows
    Truth and understanding
    Warm summer sand between open toes

    Step by step
    New mysteries unfold
    Time to release dreams
    That will never grow old

    Surf growing stronger
    As time moves on
    Lessons to be learned
    Lessons to teach
    It all became clear
    With a walk on the beach

    Breathe the air
    Salty and fresh
    Stare at the sunset
    Oh another time
    Another place
    Think of me
    With a wind chafed smile upon your face

    BE

    (c) Bruce H. Edwards, 2001
     
  2. epiphany

    epiphany Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Take me there....

    There is something about looking into the horizon of a setting sun, the sand in your toes, and the calmness of the sea.....that puts you in thought and reflection. Nice poem...........Epiphany:heart:
     
  3. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    And so

    shall it be. Always a smile...always.

    Excellent piece.

    thank you

    a
     
  4. Destee

    Destee destee.com STAFF

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    what a beautiful way to start a day

    thank you for this BE

    :heart:

    Destee
     
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