Black Poetry : Ode to

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by brotherman, Mar 29, 2002.

  1. brotherman

    brotherman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I would like to post something
    tonight
    but it's friday
    instead I'll just
    make up sum'n
    and do it my way
    you should be up on how I do it
    by now right?
    like nothing to it
    flow like fluid
    and excite, right?
    Pencil in a little spin
    on reality
    and hope to God like some Jihad
    my principalities
    don't get lost in the sauce
    pent to no proverbial cross
    get tossed
    flipped off
    or get your mental eyes
    crossed....

    like what the hell is b'man talking about?

    what the phuk it matter, yo
    it's friday
    my day
    my way
    to shoot tha' ****
    whether I miss or hit
    I'll still be poetically legit
    misfit me if you wanna
    like arabs to a corner
    my bombshells come from the mind's eye....
    sometimes coronas

    where was I...?

    Oh yeah,
    It's friday
    do or die day
    when the city plans for outings
    clubs, shootings, and roudy
    activities
    don't ask me out
    cause mack abilities
    are well known like trilogies
    never for seconds
    but thirds
    ask Res U 'me
    that's my word
    no need to give it
    just let thoughts pillage
    profoundly
    as I scrill it
    for those cats wit'
    curiosity
    I was sent
    to kill it
    taking away
    from all these love themes
    and thoughts of cream

    dropping it just for -"love"
    oh ni! flip side of the emotional state of holding a grudge
    but love, hear me now
    get confused and you lose
    because my tactic is to
    leave you with this rhythm -no blues
    Cause today is the
    get fly day
    get high day
    hit the highway
    far from dry day
    cause liquor knows ya' name
    on freaky friday
    -it becomes shawty!!
    for some odd reason
    I keep forgetting
    words a fixed
    and mixed with twisting
    where this is going - I dunno
    so
    where was I...

    oh yeah,
    its friday...:D

    Be safe and see ya' soon!!!!
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    freestyle wit a smile .......do yo thang!!
     
  3. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Bro'man.


    ...yous a wild boy! :D

    (& i'm diggin' yo flow).

    :heart:
    Elayne.
     
  4. brotherman

    brotherman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Oh no, yous a wild girl! Thanks for the duggage.
     
  5. blackwoman

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    I liked this one. It was nice.