Black Poetry : Ode to You

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by thatgirl74, Mar 25, 2006.

  1. thatgirl74

    thatgirl74 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You are the perfect combination
    Like Ice cream and pretzels,
    Rose petals and baths you are
    The right amount of street mixed with
    The perfect amount of gentle.
    I love you cause you make me feel
    Protected and you make me feel cherished
    Seeing you in you Timbs and jeans with that
    Certain swagger gives me goose bumps
    Watching you sleep at night looking
    Like an angel makes me smile.
    I love you because you are neither
    Thug or Softie but because you are both
    You are my caramel Sundae with all
    The toppings my decadent dessert you fulfill
    My sweet tooth and my dreams.
     
  2. Defiantson

    Defiantson Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Awwww... how sweet, I like this.... I hope he knows how much he is really loved. This was beautiuful.... Keep it up
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ThatGirl, thinks that she's so "BAD" In reality... she is nothing less than amazingly gifted.

    A BRILLIANT contemporary love song!
     
  4. thatgirl74

    thatgirl74 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    1poet thanks for the luv.. been a while sine I have posted nice to get that positive response.

    :roll:
     
  5. thatgirl74

    thatgirl74 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Defiant thanks glad to meet ya and yes I make sure he knows...
     
  6. Legendof_1_Spirit

    Legendof_1_Spirit Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    <floats in>

    Great work poet! I enjoyed the wittiness of your expression and the delectable metaphors that you employed.

    <floats out>
     
  7. nevar

    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hey thatgirl how you doing hopefully fine. well i like your piece do continue to flo on.
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Loved your description of him, a mix of seemingly opposite things, together making this individual you adore. Nice reading you again.
     
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    You layed that one poet
    I was flowing with you
    Yup your man you have created
    Hope he got a chance to feel this
    Much Love Poet-Enjoyed
     
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    thatgirl74 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanx Watz,
    Needed to get back to the swing of things..
    Thanx Tantrum
    Glad you enjoyed it