Black Poetry : ode to HODEE

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  1. SPIRITNORTH

    SPIRITNORTH Banned MEMBER

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    u only knew me thru my poetry
    words of sorrow and grief
    poured out of me

    i am your number one fan
    before we even spoke
    now your words of wisdom
    make me choke

    like from hindu smoke

    u understand and do not judge
    responses of patience as i
    work thru lifes
    mudd

    with clear reasurrance
    objectivity and flare
    you are a man of the stars
    that reign in the air

    give constant reassurance
    when u see i may be weak
    but u know im really strong
    and tell it to me

    a true friend indeed
    God sent u to me
    the omnipotent one
    forsaw your cradle for my needs

    with issues of your own
    u found time to really care
    for a hand u never touched
    but u were always there

    healing with words
    kind with no fluff
    give it to me str8
    sincere and yet tuff

    thanks hodee
    you don't know
    just how much
    your presence means to me.
     
  2. HODEE

    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you Sprit North..

    I did the easy part, you did the work. Nothing but love for ya!
     
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    That was very sweet and endearing!

    Stay Focused,

    Ujima
     
  4. Khasm13

    Khasm13 STAFF STAFF

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    this was a lovely dedication flow...
    it's nice to meet people that actually care...
    and are not looking for something in return...
    props to you hodee
    one love
    khasm
     
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    this was so sweet....
    posed well
     
  6. watzinaname

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    Lucky to find a friend like this, Spiritnorth, very nicely posed.
     
  7. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was not only beautiful...but
    most of all it is "TRUE"...
    When Hodee speaks it's always
    thought provoking and wise...
    I can completely relate...
    He is indeed a gem...
     
  8. triniti424

    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Awwwww...that is BEAUTIFUL
    I love to see our family Lovin and spreadin Love
    :grouphug:
    spirit this was beautiful
    and Hodee Bear :) jus as Lovely
     
  9. HODEE

    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Again.. Sprit you blew me away with this. I never expected a few kinds words of encouragement would garner me such a fine lyrical flow... Thanks family for sharing this and saying the nice things you know about me. I'm a mellow fellow..:shades: I see inner beauty in everyone I meet and know. I search it out!
     
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