Black Poetry : Ode To He

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  1. MsBerry_98

    MsBerry_98 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Who would have thought, after all of this time,
    that you would be he.
    The one who's gotten all inside of my head,
    between my legs, and changed my perspective.

    Your tantric voice and erotic words always calling
    me to cum and go to that place that defies space,
    time, and distance.
    Verbally stroking the one who lies asleep,
    deep inside of me.
    Always bidding her, with a cum hither tune, like the
    mythical sirens, to awaken,
    swell with emotion, and cry out.

    And her, being the obedient young lady she is,
    responds to you in more ways...
    with more ease...
    than ever I thought possible.

    Humming a familiar tune,
    floating on an abstract staff,
    aching to become part of your symphony.
    To be the chorus of the song
    that lulls you to sleep,
    calls you to wake,
    the soundtrack to your day.

    I realize I want to be taken.
    To be the preoccupation whipsering myself
    to your mind in surrender...

    Taking my time, I take a minute,
    and take all of you in.
    So outside of myself, yet so of myself.

    I certainly never thought
    that you would be he...
    all inside of my head,
    between my legs, and changing
    my perspective...
     
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    dnommo Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    depth of your words are true to your craft. this one is interesting. Welcome to the family as one Md'r to another...

    Grab a seat and sit a while...

    tight scribe poet...i look forward to more...
     
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    absolutely hot my sister. the brother must really be all up in a sister's head. i'm sure he's wearing soft shoes. hot. absolutely hot.
     
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    Danilyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :hot: I need a drink....

    My sista, that poem reminds me of a certain someone (you know who) all up in my past. Just ****!!!!!!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    well now !!

    got even me shaking my head (((((:)eek: ))))))
    flow head on sis.. work dem keys ...YA HEARD ME !!:)
     
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    Got my vote

    It is hot in here!
     
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    MsBerry_98 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks!!!

    I must admit that it was a bit scary to put this one out there... I had to ask for permission;) . Dlyn: I knew if no one else would... you would feel me. My sister!:smokin:
     
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    HE be da one changing up ****...

    oh...i see.

    hmmm.:)

    let the river flow.
     
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    can't nobody be mad 'bout nunna this !

    :hot:
     
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    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    MsB

    Nice work poetess!!

    N2