Quiet Poetry Lounge : Ode To E

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by MORE, Jul 21, 2003.

  1. MORE

    MORE Banned MEMBER

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    tryin my best
    to fight this fear
    that one day i'll look
    and you won't be here

    im tittering between
    solid and shook
    thought i saw my reflection
    lemme take another look

    and i feel the tears
    so familiar to me
    this a **** shame
    they wont let me be

    and the minute i hope
    and my faith is full grown
    here comes that old feelin
    of being alone, being alone

    no i can't start over
    this i already know
    so we get along together
    me and you , we gonna grow

    don't listen to your friends
    don't judge from your past
    yah honey we gonna fight
    but the love will last

    can't i talk to you
    don't we vibe together
    can't imagine not having you
    no baby, not ever!

    you are like my prize, baby
    from taking bumps and bruises
    after going on wild excursions
    of pain from fuggin with losers

    you represent my trophy
    the excellence so innate
    that has been fully born
    the day you told me your name

    and no i can't fathom
    not hearin or seeing you
    living life the way it was
    void, movements impromptu

    straight up improvised
    thats how i lived my life
    only knowing you in my dreams
    and now your in my eyes

    and i can see clearly now
    its coming together somehow
    don't wanna lie or try to
    ever know what its like
    to
    lose you.......
     
  2. LibertyLady

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    this is simply beautifull.....

    this is realy toutching......sorry but i looked around at youre profile
    i just saw you in the life chat and you said high five...? i usally dont do that but this poem was so toutching and i saw that youre birthday is 19 of august....
    i have a friend who is developing these poetrysite for me with al my poems....on it...he is a lion and he birthday is on 19 of august



    this is funny...
     
  3. MORE

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    THANKS LADY! yep imma lion alright all heart!!!:toast: :heart:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    dis was tyte flowin'
     
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    very nice flow
    Peace
     
  6. Sierra

    Sierra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hey MORE, :wave:

    I like this very much! It is very beautiful and touching!!

    ~Sierra~:heart: