Black Poetry : Ode 2 the Womanly Form

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by PositiveMindset, Jan 13, 2005.

  1. PositiveMindset

    PositiveMindset Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nothing in this world compares 2 U...
    2 be close 2 U, theres's nothing I'd be scared 2 do.
    Cuz U are what dreams are made of...
    2 keep from missing a moment of your beauty,
    I keep my eyes open when I make love.
    From the softness of your skin
    2 your intoxicating scent, U've got me.
    I wanna touch U constantly.
    From before U wake up til after U've gone 2 sleep.
    Women R so sexy, can U blame me?
    That switch in your walk...
    The pleasant voice when U talk...
    U have no idea that I'm helplessly under your spell.
    So much that I lift my nose in the air when I catch a residual smell of perfume.
    I believe love birthed U cuz 2 me, U're flawless.
    It's as if U're an extraordinarily beautiful painting & God was the artist.

    Your curves have me hypnotized.
    Forgive me if while we speak, sometimes I don't look in your eyes
    Cuz I'm mesmorized by your luscious lips,
    Your breasteses, thick thighs, & wide hips.
    From the short 2 the tall,
    The heavy-set 2 the small, U're all uniquely attractive.
    U've got my mind doing multiple backflips.
    Wishing I could be just 1 piece of your clothes.
    If I could choose, I'd rather be your panties most.
    Excuse me...
    I'm infatuated with the woman's form so much I had a temporary
    moment of mental lapse.
    2 me, U're an angel that tried 2 get into heaven, but they sent U back
    Cuz U have a job 2 finish.
    Like a schoolboy, I get aroused by just the thought of your image.
    When I was younger, I thought I was a perverted freak
    Cuz I'd catch myself staring at a woman's toenails & feet.
    Til I heard a woman's feet R a mirror 2 her body,
    Cuz if her feet R pampered, the rest of her is is what my father taught me.
    I've sed it before & I'll say it til all of time has ended,
    There's nothing in this universe quite as lovely as the soft, sexy form of women.
     
  2. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i really loved this:)
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    this drip as warm and beautiful as ever of the womanly worth
    awesome tyte scribe
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I concur. feeling you on this tribute to one of God's most beautiful creations.
     
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    MADDRAPPER Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was nice but let me drop this here

    In rap I hardcore explode and like poor roads deny access

    To towns try impress these clowns, they always travel best

    On gravel master of tune during the afternoon but like

    Kids in the library I try very hard not to talk but body hyped

    Seen quotes scatter like remote data set my program to

    Let my flow slam like joysticks on computers so it’s **** true

    Blend demonstrates style and accentuates smile like twinkles

    In eyes, wrinkle vibes awaken folks making smoke water sprinkles

    On computer facts are sent but like an accident that hurt people

    And alert steeples of churches leaving the ungodly sinners feeble

    Mandatory strife is the story of my life hover proper like a helicopter

    Lover of the skies and by color and size classify objects become author

    Of books, sure is nice to have pure advice wish to be confined to fact
     
  6. daroc

    daroc Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice one... it made me feel good inside.
     
  7. PositiveMindset

    PositiveMindset Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank U 4 the feel, fam...but....

    Madd, why must that name befit U? I understand the fact that U wanna get read but bruh, as a response 2 someone else's piece?

    Give love & jet, then U'd get that same respect...

    Peace.:peace:
     
  8. daroc

    daroc Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    "Madd, why must that name befit U? I understand the fact that U wanna get read but bruh, as a response 2 someone else's piece?

    Give love & jet, then U'd get that same respect..."

    if only u knew how good that sounds-
     
  9. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Brotha, that ode was quite lovely indeed. Do flow on.
     
  10. Ireadastory

    Ireadastory Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Bless you my brother, if I never ever felt appreciated as a beautiful creature of Christ I feel it now. Beautiful, beautiful piece! Great flow!
     
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