Black Poetry : ODE 2 A SISTAH

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    For there is nothing i couldn't bare
    to see ya loyality and humble care

    Da greatest depth of humankind
    and the wisdomize uplifting mind

    Deepest of power in yo walk
    wordz of knowledge when u talk

    Alwayz there to give a hand
    a ear and heart dat understand

    You are the finest jewel to any man
    beautiful and soulful i call u woman

    Queen of treasury sparkling bright
    greater then da starz in da night

    Every page u have kissed wit pen
    left a compromise souls will mend

    I've adored u in such short tyme
    to feel ya pain written to line

    Bath in St.Victory
    ya a part of a legacy history

    Da nubian sistah wit a flair
    mentally i watch wit a stare

    Holding u closer to rise in joy
    letting u know ya true to da core

    ya mystical and dimentional
    mind free and magical

    A stilt single beautiful flower
    blooming upon da rayz by da hour

    Displaying a womanly strong power
    and crystalizing like wintery shower

    Ode to u inside tis morrow
    pass all fears and da sorrow

    Lay a story ever so free
    as i read into u wit notion of we

    I bow in honor and respect
    this day forth never forget

    U pose a wealth so worthy dat shine
    sometime i wish u was mine

    ya such a sweet blessing
    dat my heart lone a confessing

    A fairy angel from a bove
    place'd on earth wit sensual love .
    :angel1::angel1::angel1::angel1::angel1:
     
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    WOW!!!!

    This is SO SPECIAL....

    and...

    Sound just like you talkin bout "ME" :D::thanks:heheehehe...


    M.E.
    :hearts2:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    look out now true u might get taken and i play for keeps .....Thank u sis
     
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    truetothecause Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :dj::dj:
    "Take ME...I'm yours
    Come on take ME...I'm yours"
    :dj::dj:

    Your words are Music to my Ears:drums:


    M.E.
    :hearts2:
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    To be truly seen this way, acknowledged, respected, and loved for all that you do...isn't that what everyone wants and deserves? Well said poet.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    becareful truetothecause da melodies will wrap you up !

    yes watz i strongly believe every woman should and do deserve this
    i so bless it as i render this notion to a soul wit care free will .
     
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    sweet apple*pie Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was very, very lovely....

    a love passionatly and simultaneously felt. Speaks volumes...

    Volumes that I find pleasure in reading...
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Thank you happy u found it as such , one so deserve
     
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    Hi Sir Richness...

    Though I totally enjoy the entire flow...

    those two lines flowed deepest!


    MaddSistahlyLovee!
    Coco:heart:
     
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    real love

    for our queens

    $$$RICH$$$ you did it up boy boy

    :tennis:
     
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