Black Poetry : October (messages from the Afro)

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  1. UbZoRbShUn

    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I have to go away for a while
    Need to sort through these
    Thoughts of mine
    October is never easy for me
    This is the month I lost a good
    Friend
    I tend to back off and keep to self
    You may not hear from me but
    Please know I'm still here
    I can't say I will call
    Nor can I say I'll send you mail
    Just want you to know I love you
    This month is just hell
    I will miss your jokes (some were funny)
    Your scribes too
    Keep me in your thoughts, as I will
    You
    I'm gone pick this Afro until
    The knowledge I seek is found
    So if you see lye straight strands
    Let em blow in the wind cause
    They used to belong to this girl
    I once knew….
    She's growing up now
    Facing womanhood



    These R my Nappy Ramblings
     
  2. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    U,

    Sistuh this iz nice...but, uh is this just a nice piece or are you really chillin' fo a minute?

    blak
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    what'z up!!!!

    very well written here but where ya going ya in
    a mind set of thoughts and come back laters
     
  4. UbZoRbShUn

    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    verb, $RICH$

    Imma be gone for a hot minute. Like I said I'll be here in spirit, I need to do some cleaning and get some things organized in ma head iz all. I'll be back probably before you know it. I just don't want to leave everyone with unanswered questions. October's are always hard for me is all and Im dealing with some personal issues as well. Now yall know I can't leave Destee for long. Im like a crackhead and this ma fix.

    Who knows maybe my Afro pick will finally get that fist.



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  5. epiphany

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    Zorb......

    I can relate....I lost my best friend.....you never forget, but she is in my heart always.....as long as she is in your heart, she will be with you in spirit always......sorry for your lost.

    Epiphany :heart:
     
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    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ZorbShun....


    although imma miss you... i ain't trippin'...
    'cause i know what you're dealing with.
    March is my month... & it seems that i feel
    each&every one of those 31 days!

    so... if you need me... all you gotta do is
    say the word! ThatsReal! Please know it!

    AlwaysPeace&Love.
    Sunny~
     
  7. UbZoRbShUn

    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Pip and Sunny, ladies I thank you for your words. No matter how much time is put on the clok it's like yesterday. I'm cool though, don't worry. I'll be back before the ink dries.



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  8. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Zorb,

    I'm sorry to hear you lost a friend.....I'll pray for God to ease your sorrow.

    Madd Sistahly Love:heart:
    CCBSKYN
     
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    make sure you use the pick with the black fist on it...for power and strength you know?
     
  10. UbZoRbShUn

    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Brotha D

    I ain't quit graduated to that one just yet, but I know what you talkin bout.

    CC im good,it's been a while but October always gets me because I was the last person he called you know.



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