Quiet Poetry Lounge : October...for GD ..song poem #96

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by deepy, Mar 11, 2004.

  1. deepy

    deepy going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    a mother died today - another year has passed
    a chld was born today - another moment on
    a lover left his home - another second dew
    another birthday soon - more hours coming true

    a mother died today - a friend of mine is sad
    a job came through this morn - another friend is glad
    an idea moved (raged) inside - a loved one felt the joy
    a song was sung today - and children play with toys

    I sing my songs of love - a friend of mine is sad
    I cry philosophic sounds - another wonders why
    I moan a million tears - to wash the pain from me
    a mother died today - another soul runs free
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    additional song lines (January):
    let the tears roll down - wash away the pain
    let your face, your eyes become a summer rain
    and hold your child and see the beauty of her soul
    your mothers there, inside, forever she will hold..
     
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    The good, the bad, and life goes on, loved the flow of this.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    twisted song of life
    tyte drop
     
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    and so as we have it...life itself
    that was well recieved...from begining...to end
     
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    deepy going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    rich -queen - watz....


    forgive the familiarity..
    but thanks you three
    for supporting me....
     
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    deepy going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    another mother
    gone yesterday..summoning
    anquish for beloved..
     
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    My Mom's best friend is dying and my Mom is so sad. It makes me sad and then your poem says it all. tUFFY:
     
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    much love sis
    feeling this
    for real
    Peace
    BlueWater:heart:
     
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    deepy going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    Tuffy...i hoped it helped...
    bluewater thanks for the encouragement..
    I sing it alot...

    when destee grows to the next level..I will write the music down...
     
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    Hmmmm this was truly beautiful. Thank you for your shades of beauty.
    ~Earthly Allure
     
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