Black Poetry : :oceans:

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  1. AgAbus

    AgAbus Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i
    have spoken
    something
    significant
    to the
    waves of
    foreign oceans
    not conerned with
    my growth but
    more like
    my
    demise.

    i
    have inebriated
    my senses...hoping
    to achieve numb
    and regard u
    with cold
    eyes cast in bronze.

    u
    have raped
    my landscape of
    every desire to
    reproduce; every
    desire to just...

    i
    have grown
    rusty in my
    lips-not
    able to speak 'us'
    but now quick to speak
    'me.'
    i
    am brittle
    in my feelings for
    u, brittle for the
    desire to
    sodomize ur freedom
    and watch you
    bleed suprise
    in both orgasmic clarity
    mingled with
    horror.

    i
    have hidden
    me from you, have
    spoken steely sorrow
    to foreign oceans
    who silently
    ignore me...speaking
    volumes of darkness against
    my ears instead of
    whitewashed
    love.




    Copyright 2008/AgAbus



     
  2. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    yes it will be oceans apart

    especially when someone is not deal in the real

    not appreciating you

    especially when it seems like you given your all

    your best

    :?:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    no way one could feel you when they are falsely in it and the ocean will open wider
    this was tyte
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    It seems like there's something tainted about the water, like it's murky. Perhaps the tides will turn and the oceans will become like crystal again. Loving your style.
     
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    AgAbus:
    This was beautiful in a sad kind of way but beautiful still the same.


    Much luv
     
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    Power of your words

    Beautifully powerful. We each receive something different when we read. For me, as I read this touching piece, I felt a tale of grief and torment of our Ancestors forced across oceans to foreign shores in chains of bronzed iron. Many of whom have perished in the waves and their descendants now trying to heal from the rape of their minds and dignity. This piece speaks volumes to my soul and I guess I receive this piece in this way at this time when we have been focusing here in the UK(kk) and in many of the Islands, on the Remembrance of our Ancestors of the Maafa.

    Peace, Love, Light continue to embrace and inspire you. Do you teach writing classes :?:
    1UL
     
  7. AgAbus

    AgAbus Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Soulosophy...
    4Ever...
    WAtz...
    Rich...
    and
    Soja...

    Yo thank you all for your kindness and intense love and support...you all are great men and women and I am humbled.
     
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    Powerful write poet

    sometimes the oceans current tries to take us a to a place we don't want to be and leaves us with some choices to make...

    as long as you have peace of mind in mind...you have made the right one!
     
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