Black Poetry : Oceans of Tears

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  1. howardtsu

    howardtsu Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    could i love you for eternity?

    the question is constantly burning me

    i wish you were learning me the right way to talk to your heart

    i walked up to you that Friday night at the start of our friendship

    anticipating hours of kinship

    bringing you carts of flowers numerous enough to fill up ten Queen Mary ships

    you're so humerous just being yourself

    i wish there were rumors of us being constantly stacked on your shelf

    i think your friendly consumer has convinced you that he's the elf

    you need

    while i'm struggling in weeds that won't let me succeed in my attempts to plead

    for your forgiveness



    love,

    howard
     
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    i'm sorry

    what an apology! she should give you a second chance.
    Oh, Baby, give me one mo chance...
    I got that good flow, girl, you did'nt know

    Holla back
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    felt u here on dis one
     
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    Sincerity is usually felt, and hopefully accepted. This flowed as deep as an ocean, howard.
     
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    thanks $$rich$$

    thanks sha'iyn

    maybe she will :)


    thanks watzinaname
     
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