Black Poetry : ocean view pt2

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  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    up stairs for a ocean view out looking
    the window…my vision of you and I
    intertwine and undress…souls reaching
    to become one…as the love flows………..

    A magical mystery bliss..
    inside the mist of a kiss….
    Produce a magic twist
    Captured up in a list…of..
    Magical glimmers…as....
    starz begin to gleam bright…
    Streamin from above
    flames ignite da kiss
    blaze into da mystic
    spiritual …of u and i…
    Smoothly we glide…
    Across thy sea..
    of heavenly bliss…..
    da moon on beam….
    As we lay an
    intertwine in this
    Deep dreamy scene…
    We give ourselves…
    completely as da
    Drums of love beats…
    As the morning sun rise…
    A love so sweet and meek…as….
    submission of two into one
    begins....

    up stairs for a ocean view out looking
    over the balcony…my vision of u and I
    a mystic notion of emotions moves …
    souls reaching and searching
    to become one…as the love flows………..

    a blkangel thang....
     
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    Khasm13 STAFF STAFF

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    this was a nice scene you painted...
    mystic...
    peace
    khasm
     
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    real nice, deeply felt wish it was longer
     
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    who says the second time around not's as good as the first?
     
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    to canvas u have expressed and painted a masterpiece very nice scribe poetess
     
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    Khasm13...thank you means alot comin from you..much love my dear brother

    mailman2468..thanks for da read..its a part 1 that goes with this...so u can see the whole vision...thanks for da love

    caramelpython ahhh man the veiw of the ocean of vision is always better the second time...much love

    My $$RICH$$ thank you..you paint sum pretty scenes as well
    your support means so much thanks again....
     
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    this is indeed a beautiful set of images, my sistah. don't just dream, let it happen. much love
     
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    gempis you are a swet heart...thanks for your love and support means so much...
     
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    This does read like something out of a dream, but you brought it to life.
     
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    heart felt flow
    as the love flow
    wonderful vibe
    Peace
     
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