Black Poetry : ocean view…

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  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Take ya up stairs for a ocean view…


    Over looking the ocean…
    As the warm summer
    breeze blow..you can hear
    wind charms in a distance…..
    the starz glisten
    as the love flows….
    waves crashin and
    and the moon
    show the shadows
    of two
    who intertwine in
    fine sheets of red satin
    tender kisses in the
    night bliss
    releases and melt in
    the lighten of two..
    motion of feelings
    cast a romantic
    notion as emotions
    move… hearts warm
    and full of love
    as they fall into a groove
    of midnight madness
    drums play the theme...
    as the moon begins to beam...
    a ray of light placed
    upon them as their
    heart and soul
    becomes one....

    up stairs for a ocean view out looking
    the window…my vision of you and I
    intertwine and undress…souls reaching
    to become one…as the love flows………..

    a blkangel thang.....:angel1:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very moving flow
    tyte
     
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    wow...now this is a fantasy
    that I would have to strive to fulfill..
    such beauty...besides I love the ocean
    and there is nothing more romantic
    than hearing the waves crash..
    taking walks along the shore...
    at midnight...sleeping with the
    doors open...and feeling the
    breeze in the morning...mmmmm

    oh...you bring back memories for me
    with this piece...

    Wow....very nice scribe!
     
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    nice scenery on dis joint....
    get'n me past
    da chilly wind in da city
    peace
    khasm
     
  5. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Cindy....glad you enjoy this mental vision..
    a dream that can become reality...thankz

    $$RICH$$ very movin indeed...the vision of two that becomes one
    in the heart within a vision...of a dream that was made reality
    within onces mind..thank for the love

    angelicsage ahhh yesss sweet mental play awakes past moments as one intertwine and gives one self completely..i am glad you enjoyed this piece...much love:angel1:

    Khasm13..nice to know i can warm a brother mind...with a vision..must do it again sumtime...much love.... :glasses:
     
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    ahh
    the view is realy lovely
    nice flow sis
    Peace
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    oh Sister Blue....you always place a smile on my face...
    you give o much love..thank you it means alot
     
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    expressed so sweetly and well da heart
    pose a love of two as one ....tyte
     
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    Reminding me of my days in the Islands...um!

    This was sweet and nostaligic for me...
    I spent the first years of my marriage living in the Caribbean's
    and that was what I loved the most...making love on sandy beaches
    and watching the moonlit "Oceanviews"...Thanks for taking me there, again!

    Blessings On Your House!
     
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    $$RICH$$ ...i am just glad you enjoyed your support and love given means alot....thank u

    msluciousb -i am glad you enjoyed this vision of two...your support and love...
    have touch me thank you....Caribbean's..mmmm..i always wanted to go there
    maybe oneday....thank you again glad it brought happy memories
    :thanks:
     
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