Black Poetry : ocean veiw pt3 the end of the dream.....

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  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    up stairs for a ocean view out looking
    over the balcony…my vision of u and I
    a mystic notion of emotions moves …
    souls reaching and searching
    to become one…as the love flows………..

    this daydream of
    perfect submission
    felt of warmth
    from a heart so true…
    lookin over the
    ocean view
    soul took hold…
    the gentle breeze
    embraced the heart…..
    as I closed my
    eyez once more…
    the light of love
    shinin bright
    hopin it will
    guide you to me…
    the vision of you and I….
    so clear….
    bodies wrap in
    the satin sheets…
    rose petals lay
    as a pleasant
    melody of jazz play
    from our hearts…
    tears of joy runs from
    our faces as we
    Interlace….
    in perfect harmony
    the galaxy takes
    on a new look
    as we touch in a
    mystical embrace…
    trace thy soul
    and enter into thy mind..
    to fit in thy
    heart…
    emotions begin to roam
    da room…as spirits of you and I
    interlock…into one…..
    as you walk thru the door…

    up stairs for a ocean view out looking
    the window…my vision of you and I
    souls become one…as hearts embrace
    the love flows………..
    as you take me in your arms…..

    sometimes dreams do come true....:heart:

    a blkangel thang:angel1:
     
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    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Very Nice

    I have enjoyed all three parts of Ocean View. Keep gracing us with your flows.
     
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    mzblkangel, this was heavenly.

    Beautifully scribed.

    My soul and mind cries out 4 one as lovely as yours.

    Keep it going.
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    HODEE :thanks: i am glad u like all 3 parts...means alot your support you give...:angel1:


    PositiveMindset thank you so much means alot coming from you.....we all look for it..i feel ya...one day :angel1:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very nice it was beautiful all dreams end once we wake up !
     
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    Awwwww......this was so beautiful.....how could this be the end of the dream......it must be more.......come on hit us up with a part four......before the dream just ends like that......keep them creative juices flowin'........I loved this........ocean view........ENCORE!!!!!!ENOCRE!!!!!!!!!!
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    $$RICH$$ thanks for da love.....i feel ya :angel1:


    foxylady30315..thanks baby girl..glad you likes....but a part 4????i dont know :angel1:
     
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    yes dream can come true indeed
    wonderful scribe loved the vision
    just lovely
    Peace
     
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    sometimes dreams do come true..
    And thank goodness for that. Thanks for all the beautiful imagery.
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Bluewater and watzinaname..glad yall like the vision....much love..thanks for da love....:angel1:
     
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