Black Poetry : ocean veiw encore......

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  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    up stairs for a ocean view out looking
    the window…my vision of you and I
    souls become one…as hearts embrace
    the love flows………..

    the ocean waves dance..
    as you trace thy heart…
    the galaxy orbs sparkle
    in da light of night..
    captured in da
    rapture of you and i..
    as you hold me with care
    wrap in satin….as our bodies
    intertwine drums
    begin to play low..and the
    harmony of
    you and I
    set in as our souls become one
    like a vision of a dream
    over looking the ocean
    the moon comes thru
    Embraces the essence of us

    Taking us for a ocean view…..
    Where loves play
    and the dream
    of reality
    is set forth
    the starz shine
    and the moon beams…
    like....the....
    awakenin of the
    morning flower
    as the love flows.........
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks for bringing us back outside by the ocean--beautiful.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    this was the water splash indeed love this
    the riverside at bay watching as the ocean
    view da encore i feel the depth of ya pen ....wow !!
    tyte sistah Queen
     
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    krazelyricks Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yayyyyyyyyyy!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    Thanks angel for doin' an encore.......... this was tyte......I loved this joint........it was beautiful.....I absolutely adored this piece.......Whoa!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!.........In fact, I'm speechless.....keep yo pen flowin'

    foxy............
     
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    this was really beautiful sister the view ahhh so wonderful...enjoying this flow
    Peace
     
  6. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    watzinaname..thank you glad you enjoyed the whole scene..much love my sister :angel1:

    $$RICH$$...ahh you are so kind thank you..wow the support you give is wonderful:)

    foxylady30315..lol thank you foxy....i am glad you like it...the last of it is here.... :angel1:

    Bluewater....thank you glad you like...thank you for your support sis...means alot :)


    let me take you here one more time......
    the ocean view...
    out my window down by the shores..
    a vision of you and i as the love
    shines bright..
    for the vision must come to
    reality as our bodies yearn
    cant pretend i cant leave it this way..
    for the vision of you and i was a glow in da sky.....
    up stairs for a ocean view
    my vision of you and I
    souls become one…as hearts embrace
    the love flows………..the end...... :angel1:
     
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    mzblackangel, have i told you that i am a fan of yours? if not, i'm telling you now. i loved this piece, it was peaceful and the imagry was EVERYWHERE...hot! thanks.
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sister Red..wow ya got me speechless i am so honored....thanks for the love and support it means alot..thank you:angel1:
     
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    as you always were told!!!

    your poetry will take you somewhere.... I can feel it!!! I have been a fan of yours since the first time I heard you.......and the way you keep spit'n I'll always be one....Lmao!!!
     
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    As alwayz, you know your work da bomb right??
    This one in particular was tyte
    I like this ocean view it's out of sight

    Thanks again for doin' this encore for me........

    love ya,
    foxy..........
     
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