Black Poetry : Ocean of Lies

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  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This is madness
    Thoughts of dreams
    Dreams of thoughts
    All lost in an ocean of lies
    Within a cloud you came
    Healed my pain
    But took my soul
    Like a vampire draining my every
    Emotion...leaving my blood cold
    Taking my heart on a ride
    Just enough to take my breath
    My untouched love
    But yet touch…
    Playing a game
    Holding…pulling
    Have me waiting
    Wondering and lost
    Thoughts of dreams
    Dreams of thoughts
    In the darkness
    You were my light
    Thought I was done searching
    Now I learned my lesson
    Had a good teacher…You
    Making my heart ache
    Having my soul cry
    Calling your name
    Healed my mind
    And took the pain
    But now I am insane
    From your false love
    Being me is not good enough
    Your love…
    Is like breaking out of hell
    And taken a fall
    Before the storm
    Where the clouds cover
    And the skies darken
    As the wind sits still
    Allowing your love to
    Run through my veins
    Like a hurricane…but
    It keeps me alive
    Your voice takes me in
    And heals my pain…
    But you took my soul
    You are sweeter then honey
    But feels like a bee sting
    A diamond in the sky
    You act like you found
    But it’s not your treasure
    Only a fun time pleasure
    Thoughts of dreams
    Dreams of thoughts
    All lost in an ocean of lies

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    Monetary going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    I feel the pain you express in this peace...the heartache. :crying:

    :thanks: for sharing your pain through this peace with the Family.

    :toast:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    touching drift of lies
    feeling all dis here deeply sis.
     
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    Whoa, deepness! I feel ya, sis, and dig ya drop.
     
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    MzBlkAngel, Im really loving your vibes and emotions in this piece. Very very deep. I am really feeling you. Lots of personifications. Each line kept me on the edge of my seat. Much much love to you. Stay strong. :heart: :grouphug: :heart:
     
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    Very heartfelt piece, but wonderful lay-out...your flow is unstoppable.
     
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    O Wow...i know what you told me sista but this...this is so potent poetry

    It was emotively...YOU
     
  8. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you Triniti for all your support and love given means alot thanks sis love you!!!!


    Peace
    Angel
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you QT for your loving support happy you enjoyed the flow

    Peace
    Angel
     
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    Heyyyyyyyyyyyyy Sister Eisha....thank you for the love and support sis happy you enjoyed the flow..much love to you as well thanks!!!!!:grouphug:

    Angel
     
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