Black Poetry : Obsessed

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Alizentang, Jul 1, 2003.

  1. Alizentang

    Alizentang Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    All these silly *** hoes claim they fallin in love, but can't comprehend the meaning
    Love consists of something more than that good **** he gave you the other evening
    To really, truely love it takes bing a woman for real
    You've gotta get your mind right before love you can feel
    Cause along wit love will ALWAYS come pain
    If it's really really love, you feel it pumping thru your veins
    You say if you're cut you're blood would run blue
    But if it was me, I'd bleed only true to you

    After your heart chips, it slowly starts to shatter
    The world could crumble around you and it wouldn't even matter
    I'm tired of spening latenights all alone
    Wish I could turn back time when love brought you home
    You see, I know what it is to love, thanks to you
    I'd never betray your ***, I'd always stay tru
    But you've moved on ain't **** I can do
    Cause if I had the chance, I'd run back to you

    Tryin to push on and get on my feet
    I can't help it tho, without you I'm weak
    The heart is the organ that gives you life
    Mine shutdown now that I'm no longer your wife
    So if I die tonight remember me
    And how life with me used to be
    Remember only good times, forget all the bad
    Promise me when they tell you im gone you won't be mad
    It was love that killed me, Nothing I could do
    Just know im in heaven watching over you

    When it's finally time for you to come home
    I promise you won't be walking through the golden gates alone
    Cause me and our child are there with your wings
    And God's waiting too, with our wedding rings
    What I'm trying to say is that this was meant to be
    Een after death you can't get rid of me
    There's so much love there, I cant just be friends
    DeShaun this is my goodbye, until we meet again
     
  2. Bluewater

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    wow...this is flowing...very moving feeling love to the end..flow on
    Peace
     
  3. MORE

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    :love: :love: loving this one, deep and for real. love brings pain, growing pangs!
     
  4. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    tyte flow girl...i feel ya...
     
  5. Alizentang

    Alizentang Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you everyone. Lovely I've been praying for you!
     
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    man...........this is deep...........alize....This is a deeply felt poem.....
     
  7. Alizentang

    Alizentang Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks SwtT. Only true words pour from my heart
     
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