Black Poetry : observing our love.

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by j'hiah, Aug 24, 2002.

  1. j'hiah

    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    lend me some sugar.. l am your neighbor
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    every time we argue (sometimes uncontrollably)
    every time we often disagree
    the more i see
    we were meant to be for the night ends with i love you
     
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    Heartbeat Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :) no other expression can I find. This is very tight..very right.

    BE
     
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    mkhaya lo' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yeah baby!

    I like this flow because if all couples ended every fight before they go to sleep with I love u-then the role of conflict would play a more positive role in relationships-I think..
     
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    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanx Heartbeat.
    Smilies are worth a thousand words.

    :toast: mkhaya lo'
    yo i had to show love to your true words...
    we must learn to "not let the sun go down on our wrath." (Bible verse :D)

    communication and understanding are the belt and buckler to all relationships.

    nfinite
    jh.
     
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    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You have a golden knack
    with short and sweet peaces.
    Keep shining on us. :)

    Scribeaboutit! It helps
    Coco :heart:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    da love one pose
    is da love both hold
    too sweet i feel it ....
     
  7. story

    story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice piece....as always...short-sweet-and well said...
     
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    Observing Our Love

    I can see the chemistry between you and me
    or could it be me for you you for me tit for tat
    exquisitely

    I can search high above through the sky for
    us to be hand in hand in unity and keep the
    faith for bits and pieces to float away on this
    day or should i say intuitively "yes, i can see
    me for me you for you are still my boo but tell
    the truth"

    Do you really love me unconditionally or do you
    LUV me? :rolleyes:

    pd
     
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    LISTERSCRIBIN' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    simply beautiful....
     
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    Excellent scribe poet as you use words sparingly like platinum, but never missing a thing
     
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