Black Poetry : observerance pt.2

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  1. the_story

    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    12:00 a new day starts.....

    i grasped the sheets like they
    were my only refuge
    he took me to a place
    where black butterflies
    carresed the indigo rose
    petals that they landed on...
    and i cried...
    my tears landed on your
    fingertips that u licked off
    in our acoustic melody

    i recounted to groans
    that slid off your lips
    and laid on my stomach
    that u kissed goodnight
    to sleep the midnight away....

    u sang poetry that night
    behind the paper thin walls
    that held darken memories
    of 3 minutes pass midnight....

    heat invaded my senses
    as i thought of things
    that made me blush
    beat red
    like the rebel afternoon sun
    just before night pulls
    it away screaming....

    my discontents died
    on the rollin orgasms
    that journeyed on
    to find
    a habitation....

    i was whole again....

    :heart:
    -story
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very nice scribe u are flowin very smoothly
    wow!!!
     
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    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thaks your richness, much love, glad u liked it...
    ,uch love,
    -story
     
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    indeed lovin ya flow...
    really nice
     
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    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    glad u likd it mz.black....
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