Black Poetry : Observations

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by AfroBoricuaRoni, Nov 16, 2003.

  1. AfroBoricuaRoni

    AfroBoricuaRoni Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    **It's gunna be my last one for a minute cuz I hear floodin' the forum ain't cute :)...

    Standing outside looking in
    Looking into a world of lies
    Lying to the weak minds that follow
    Follow false prophets and teachings
    Teaching that
    Positive is negative and
    Negative is positive and
    Positivity is wrong in
    Wrong in the eyes of closed minds
    Minds that control actions and movements
    Movements guided by souls
    Souls longing to be accepted
    Accepted by the masses
    Masses who say
    Smoke and drink and do bad things
    Things that hurt other cuz
    Others don't care for you so
    Go out and get yours and
    Enjoy music that defiles you and
    Roll your eyes at whoever bids you a good morning and
    Say learning is boring so
    Cut that class cuz down here is where it's at and
    Up there is for sell outs
    Sell outs who thought they were better than us
    Well...
    Well if this is what the in crowd demands then
    Then the in crowd will just have to kiss my a** cuz
    I've got goals to reach and
    I've got souls to teach and
    I've got money to make and
    I've got profits to take and
    A God to serve and
    A voice that ain't been heard so
    If in is how I win then
    I'd rather have lost

    -Roni
     
  2. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice drop...much love :angel1:
     
  3. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thought provoking...

    I've got goals to reach and
    I've got souls to teach and
    I've got money to make and
    I've got profits to take and
    A God to serve and
    A voice that ain't been heard so
    If in is how I win then
    I'd rather have lost



    Well...the wonderful thing is that what often appears to be...
    isn't...really, the masses who follow the crowd will eventually
    be lead by those like yourself...who chose to blaze a trail
    with truth & goodness rather than follow a narrow path
    of nothingness.....Continue blazing the trail, the lost
    will eventually follow...

    Conscious Scribe...Poet!
     
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    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    to be embrace
    for no reason
    to be love
    for no reason
    to be
    nice drop
    Peace
     
  5. PositiveMindset

    PositiveMindset Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Continuous head nods.

    I'll hold your hand on the journey to the outcrowds mansion.
     
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    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    WOW...
    sista ya had me rollin at ya pre-poem comment lol
    but if u have more scribes like these than gurl PUh_LEASE...flow on
    lol
    beginning to end...ya quality quill at work :)
     
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