Black Poetry : Obligations

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by howardtsu, Jun 25, 2008.

  1. howardtsu

    howardtsu Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    morgan :

    Eve didn't like walking around the circular quay anymore

    it used to be an “eyesoar”

    but without Howard's store

    filling her memorys with lore

    her eye’s were too sore

    for hi’s that used to soar

    everytime she walked through Circular Quay with pies that Howard adored

    jaimz :

    that’s understandable

    but what about Howard?

    morgan :

    well ….

    Howard didn’t like walking around the circular way without Eve’s rapport either

    he missed the way him and Eve use to admire the circular array of shops along the shore

    you see neither of them expected that them meeting would give rise to their desire to explore

    the semicircular displays

    that appeared everytime they shared a sunrise together

    could you hand me that Skor?

    [handing it to him]

    jaimz :

    so then what happened?

    morgan :

    they eventually left the circular bay

    jaimz :

    why?

    morgan :

    no one knows

    but it’s said that even to this day Howard can be found handing out romantic circulars

    jaimz :

    what do they say?

    morgan :

    what else?

    [Jaimz nods]



    love,

    eve & howard
     
  2. asimplepoet

    asimplepoet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I loved how this word play played out and told another piece of the saga that is eve and howard. excellent write as usual.
     
  3. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The sweet tale of eve and howard is legend I see. Keep giving us pieces to the puzzle howard.
     
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    howardtsu Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks asimplepoet :)


    i will watzinaname :wave:
     
  5. soulosophy

    soulosophy Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nice write Bro Howard...interesting...

    Peace, Love, Light
    1UL
     
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