Black Poetry : Obession

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Truelyblack, Sep 24, 2003.

  1. Truelyblack

    Truelyblack Member MEMBER

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    I am in love with the idea of loving you.

    The idea of being able to touch you in all the right places.
    And have you announce your gratitude in fine tongue
    I want that

    The idea of being that shoulder that you cry on.
    And help you with any problems you may encounter.
    I want to be there.

    The idea of have a mental bond that was so strong that nothing could part us.
    Not even death.
    I want this

    The idea of just u being you excites me.
    you are my dealer who keeps me highhhhhh and you don’t even know!
    I need that….
    :eek:
     
  2. Khasm13

    Khasm13 STAFF STAFF

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    tyte scribe....keep flow'n
    peace
    khasm
     
  3. renee31127

    renee31127 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    sometimes the "idea" is greater than the experience
    or the possession of...

    I feel your concept...
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    sometime we can't see da feelings
    this was well scribe......flow head on !
     
  6. true love

    true love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very nice...and i know just how you feel.
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very nice
    like the vibe off of this
     
  8. MORE

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    yesss i feel that fa sho.:D
     
  9. Metree

    Metree Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hello Trulyblack...this is a spin off for U to enjoy.
    I feel ya flow and it caused me to respond.
    Keep up the work as I trail behind U.


    LOVING U IN RETURN U SHALL RECIEVE

    YOU HAVE MY PERMISSION TO TOUCH
    AS I TRADE MY FEELINGS IN TONGUE
    TO GLIDE UPON YOUR SKIN
    LIKE A FEATHER...

    U GOT THAT

    I INVITE YOUR WISHES
    AS I CALL UPON U LIKE NO OTHER
    FOR YOUR SHOULDER SOAK UP MY TEARS
    BARING MY SORROWS...

    U ARE THERE

    DEATH HAS NO HOLD BARS
    ON THE BOND THAT WE CEMENTED TOGETHER
    OUR HEARTS ARE JOINED AS ONE...

    U HAVE THAT

    WHAT I DO KNOW IS THAT,
    U DESIRE FOR WHAT I GOT
    AND IT IS YOURS FOR THE ASKING
    FOR MY DEALING IS LOVE.

    I AM YOURS...IN YOUR OBESSION
     
  10. Truelyblack

    Truelyblack Member MEMBER

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    Thank you all and Mr. Metree thanks I enjoyed that :bowdown:
    You have me blushin