Black Haiku : O

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by deepy, Jun 6, 2008.

  1. deepy

    deepy going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    the tests begin now
    walking the thin jagged line
    sharks on either side.


    strong tree filled with leaves
    Wind blows fluttering, shaking
    AHH it does not break




    (c)ncn/2008
     
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    Up the mountain's path
    the road is now narrower
    so easy to fall

    Rising flood waters
    ceased, the impact, startling
    as the boat set sail
     
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    i walk this thin line
    of greatness-no pausing, no
    quickness. i walk thin lines.
     
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    Moving within self
    I walk upon life's great work
    i walk thin within
     
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    we both on the plank
    you went head first jump'd in quick
    me, a different path

    on the water shore
    I hear your souls great torture
    tried to take me there
     
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    NOT to divert
    The Pain is intense
    I travel and I stay straight
     
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    support on both sides
    the stars guide me thru the night
    'tings gonna be alright