Black Poetry : O.P.E.N.

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  1. soulful2006

    soulful2006 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Finally I see that
    I am what you have been waiting your whole life to
    be with
    I have watched you struggle with those
    who thought they were above you
    Just because you were not their perfection

    Now I am here and there is no reason to fear
    I see past your physical deep into
    Your emotional
    and just around the corner
    From that I see your
    Soul

    I think its better that we fall in love
    Like Ray Charles and Stevie Wonder
    Blind
    At least then we could open up our minds and hearts
    To the concept that
    36-26-36
    Isn't the code to a perfect woman

    Yes I am here for you to love you
    As you are and not as I desire you to be
    The almighty makes no mistakes
    and in his eyes we are all great
    SO I say I am open to you

    All that you desire to teach
    And give to the brothas and sistahs in this world
    And then all the pleasure you exspell upon your lover
    Me.....
    My eyes are trained to see the glow on the inside
    So baby please don't hide from me
    I'm only here to love so why don't you
    Let me love you

    Oppurtunities
    Presented to
    Encourage a
    New love

    Yes yes its our love affair now let me take you there

    Just a flow for a new potential love interest of mine its not complete but I think I got off on the right foot. let me know what you think.
    :kiss2: :thanks:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    O.P.E.N
    P
    E
    N.E.W - L.O.V.E
    the vast of hope blindly yet see of hearts
    indeed the start shine light yet will get brighter

    very well done feeling ya on dis one ..............
     
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    I think that this piece shows that you are open to appreciate what is important, the inner glow of a person. Well scribed poet.
     
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    I loved it... Your new love
    is very blessed to be the
    recipient of your
    O.P.E.N.ness... I'll be
    looking up your work !

    Much Peace ~
     
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    Tha-Emissary Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    That acronym was fire!
     
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    soulful2006 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you to everyone for appreciating my acronym for O.P.E.N.. I just felt like this brotha wasn't getting the best he could out of life or love so as his potential girl I decided to let him know what he was getting in me.

    Be sure to look out for a part two to this drop an maybe another acronym to go along with it.
     
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    word !!! this was tyte and two was just divine
     
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    soulful2006 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you i try to come with it if ever I promise a part two to one of my pieces.