Black Poetry : O.P.E.N. pt2 L.O.V.E.

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  1. soulful2006

    soulful2006 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    O.P.E.N.
    Oppurtunities
    Presented to
    Encourage a
    New L.O.V.E.

    Yes it is time to go to that
    Place I promised you
    To that love that will carry you
    When no one else will comfort you
    I will caress your every whim

    Open your eyes to behold the lasting treasure
    promised to only those with a heart of gold
    And see the things that only real lovers can see
    Come see our world and fall in love with me

    Like a mighty wind on a fall day
    I think some twist of fate blew you my way
    And its magic as we sit and
    I stare in your eyes
    As we watch the smaller things of life
    Pass us by

    Radiant smile from your face
    Gives new light to my soul
    Baby boy I'm honored that you let me hold
    You in my arms to keep you safe
    From all harm

    And I found that I fell and all is well
    Because I saw the light in
    Love that was right
    I know now that we hold the key
    To fulfill our own destiny

    But honestly now I don't want anything else
    to speak another word
    I just want to enjoy you loving me

    Like Luther said "once ago
    and so far away I fell in L.O.V.E...

    Letting go
    Of everything that is
    Violating your
    Everlasting trust

    Love is something that one can not define simply but no one said you had to be able to define it to feel it.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Openly
    Passionate
    Everlasting
    New
    Love
    Of
    Vow
    Eternally

    this was sweet and warm that i felt it deep inside
    u go gurl flow dis joint.......................................
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Part 2 was a great extention of part 1. Being open, one makes self available for so much life and love has to offer. Wonderful flow.
     
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    soulful2006 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you both I am more than gracious to all of you for seeing something inside of me that gives you such confidence in my abilities. It's a really warming thing to feel this good about something.
     
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    yes indeed the grace of it's beauty is within each line ....
     
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    I try to show some of myown innner beauty in every piece I write. Hopefully I'm doing a good enough job of it.