Quiet Poetry Lounge : O' Father

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    O' ye Father
    will u come
    my heart is bond
    the love is real
    ur my keeper
    i'm ya will

    O' ye Father
    set forth path
    make me stand
    in the hour glass
    see the light
    of lovingkind

    O'ye Father
    i am ya rib
    mold me as please'd
    forth thou art humble
    unto thee soul

    O' Father
    beloveth not in vain
    one shall cherish
    never blame

    I so loveth thee
    and i remember thee
    eternally
    thou legacy live within
    i am self Father
    i've walke'd as u
    i've talke'd as u
    i've praye'd unto u
    i live to seeth thee
    full bloom to blossome
    True Father i be
    child cometh of me
    i shall forth protect & honor
    delt pride ride inside
    O' Father .............................
     
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    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was absolutely beautiful.....****...i wish i could write like you...

    but i guess i have to settle for the small talents i have...

    this was very moving...
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Thank u so much but u have a talent a skill untouched
    already, i know a face of an poet ........
    u LovelyG have that face ......ware it proud as Queenz do
     
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    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww
    thats so sweet

    u tryin' to make me cry, lol
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    just given honor to a worthy sistah Queen
    it's due u ......
     
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    So graceful you are with your pen and that is why you are such a beautiful poet I feel your vibe and I luv yo flow now it's time to grace us with what you kno. :) but yet you have already, well grace us again and again and again
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    I grace u again & again never stop theirs no end
    when it come to my heart it a forever ride
    so step on in where i reside as love guide u
    Thank u , yeap u know i luv u toooooo!


    O'Father
    thou warmth has touched .....
     
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    Hey Rich,

    This is a very moving and beautiful piece!!

    Thanks for this one, Rich!!

    ~Sierra~:heart:
     
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    let it be not the light that shine upon u
    but how it move u in spirit
    O'ye Father

    thank u sierraaaaaaaaaaaaaa!!
     
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    HAPPY FATHER'S DAY!

    This is truly beautiful...
     
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