Black Poetry : O daddy.....

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by LibertyLady, Jun 20, 2004.

  1. LibertyLady

    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    o daddy ...

    you feeded me...

    o daddy

    you held me..


    o daddy ...

    you watched me fall...

    o daddy...


    you watched me rise...


    and you fixed my bike..


    daddy made me smile..



    O daddy....


    you hurt me deep...


    o daddy ..


    protected me...


    o daddy ....


    at times you were there...

    at times you werent there ...


    but our bond..


    we care...



    o daddy...


    sweet daddy ...



    i,ll leave the ""O"'





    you are my daddy..


    and i,m loving "'PAPS"












    :toast: ;)
     
  2. MANASIAC

    MANASIAC Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This is a nice Fathers Day Poem Liberity.
     
  3. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice poem lady
    Peace
    Angel
     
  4. LibertyLady

    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks guys :)



    much love to you both..




    Loveliberty:heart:
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    In good times and bad, still your dad, this was nice.
     
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    Nice to see a Fathers day peace...
    Very nice Liberty....
    Very nice... :spinstar:
     
  7. Joyce

    Joyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Like another poet said...good or bad, he is your dad. And I can tell by your expression...you love him very much. :sand:

    ~j

    ...Joyce wishing her dad was here.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    one love to paps tyte drop sistah
     
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