Black Poetry : " O.D.B."

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  1. Afridancr

    Afridancr Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ODB gave me a call
    ODB took me shopping at the mall
    ODB cooked dinner every night
    ODB had a body that was outta sight
    ODB faithfully attended church every Sunday
    ODB took the kids to school on Monday
    filled the fridge on Tuesday, lead bible study on Wednesday
    bought take out on Thursday, R & R on Friday and had family
    day on Saturday

    loved it when he made love to me in the
    middle of the night
    especially when he grabbed my *** saying,
    " baby, you feel so **** good!!!"
    me AND his grip...

    TIGHT!

    ODB got on one knee, asked me for my hand in marriage...
    9 months later pushing 'our' first child in a baby carriage

    by Wednesday, he said he was ill
    so I told him,

    "stay home baby, relax and chill"

    got home early from bible study and saw
    something that made my heart stand still..

    eyes blurry
    in a mental F Ury
    watching my husband with
    two men and a lady

    never thought HE was shady
    this **** is C r A z Y!
    so engrossed in activity
    my...presence didn't faze he
    jeprodizing the lives of his family
    see...

    there were no signs and my
    3rd eye isn't blind

    first thought...kill that Old Dirty Bastard
    BUT~~
    although I was c r u s h e d and
    in a mental fury I...
    remembered tonight's lesson in bible study.

    We are all children of God and when someone hurts us, we must learn to forgive and pray for their soul."

    So I stood in the midst of this mess and prayed forgiveness and deliverance for my husband ODB (and even those other three)>

    and now...

    I am at Peace.


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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    THEIRS NO PLACE LIKE HOME

    FORGIVENESS IS THE KEY !
    SURELY YA MIND & SOUL WILL REST NOW.
    BEAUTIFULLY DONE SISTAH!:)
     
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    Reason Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    WHoa!

    Afri this was definitely creative and intense! I see you still workin them dere' skillz...

    Madd Love
    Reas
     
  4. Afridancr

    Afridancr Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks Rich

    :kiss:
     
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    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Afri.


    ODB, huh???... hmmm...

    i can dig it. this is a testimony chile! :D

    AlwaysLove.
    SunShyne~
     
  6. Afridancr

    Afridancr Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Reas ~thanks for readin me...ova and ova sweetie!!!:kiss:

    Shery ~My big sis...when I am at peace with self, I can deal with anything!!! B.S.H!!!:eek:

    GA ~YES gyrl I said it...ODB!!! B.S.H.!!! :eek:
     
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    Natasha Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yes you are !

    rythmically gifted ! girl read like the westside story !
    sometimes we have to be the bettere man !
    tyght flow sister girl
     
  8. Afridancr

    Afridancr Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks Tasha!!

    Girl I've never had to experience anything like this (thank God) !! and I pray I never will!

    thanks for readin me!!!:D
     
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    lol....yeah odb's are no joke....
    great creativity....i thought this was going to be
    about something else....

    one love
    khasm
     
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    This was awesome! Wonderful lyrical story-telling!