Black Poetry : O Beautiful Virgin

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  1. baller

    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    O Beautiful Virgin

    Rose petals blossom
    Exponentially
    Their cup fills to the full
    As nature’s yearning calls to thee

    ~ Can you hear it ~

    Autumn’s sway giving way to
    Wintry dreams
    As (every) headlight’s beam
    Screams its chilly stance
    (For all who would glance their way)

    O, Thy Beautiful Virgin

    Nudity (un)furrows the beauty
    Lying beneath silken sheets
    The golden pearl
    Deeply embedded
    Between sculptured thighs
    Rise
    Displaying blood-rich highlights
    Standing tall
    From its encampment
    Sensitive
    To all encroachments upon its
    Ceremonial hood

    So Beautiful, The Virgin

    Thy sensual creature with pout(y) lips
    And flaring hips
    And tiny pebbles atop succulent tips
    I must confess to the
    “Allure”
    Of her flesh
    And, yet…
    I think it best she avoids the path
    She’s moving onto

    Her effervescent innocence
    Bubbling beyond the limits
    Of satisfactory contentment
    That once held her passions
    At bay
    An unleashed girl-child
    Beautifully formed
    Skating the borders of
    Fast
    And
    Hot-azzed
    Coz consuming passions
    Got her caught up
    In a heat rash

    ~ The smell of nature’s dew is strong today ~

    Thy Beautiful Virgin

    Think long the (fleshly) path
    That hails you
    Thistles and thorns
    Await you
    Beyond green pastures
    YOU
    A not-yet-defiled Honey-golden child
    Innocent and naïve
    In the way you tease
    Bending
    And
    Touching
    And
    Bumping into…
    While batting your eye(lashes)
    Issuing cries of ~ excuse you

    O, You Beautiful Virgin

    Ye of little wisdom
    Consider first the damage you do
    The harm that might come…to you
    You…who have lost her way
    …who disregard what wise ones say
    And, though, you are beautifully formed
    In a delectable frame
    You’re like the street walker in her hustle game
    Begging for attention
    And the treasures it bring
    Still, you claim
    Innocence

    You dream the dreams
    That cast sunshine and rainbows
    (Of wonderment)
    For all to see
    For you are
    (undefiled)
    By the vomit
    The world has to offer
    The corruption
    And damnation
    Spewed forth
    From the earth

    O, Beautiful Virgin

    You are the fantasy men long for
    On their wedding night
    …the essence women imagine
    In morning’s light

    Hear the praises heaped upon the woman who walks with respect
    Feel the love and kindness for she whose heart knows no neglect
    Know the generosity offered to one whose compassion knows no bounds
    Understand that to be a woman means being a woman…without let down

    Hear the words of the wise ones
    Heed the call to goodness
    For that is the path most sought
    After the luster of the girl-child fades
    And desire calls to you…no more
    Be transformed into the one
    Sought after…for advice
    Looked to…for wisdom
    Followed…for guidance
    Heed the chance
    To look beyond what you’ve become
    And take your place
    Among the wise ones​
     
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    wow......whoaaaaaaaaa! This was perfection depth and awesomely created
    I tip my hat to you [poet ya pen is mighty and powerful as da mind of motion
    as this release hit a grandslammmmmmm!!!
     
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    You have a gift with imagery and metaphor!

    Absolutely exquisite!
     
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    every PRINCESS...

    ...needs to be taught the responsibilities that come with being a QUEEN...before she becomes one.

    THANKS for reading
     
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    What a sensually sensitive and body-honoring way of saying "respect your body"
    I think its beautiful brother Baller :)
    And its refreshing to see a King lay it out like that :read:
    Much Props my brother :)
     
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    All I can do after reading this, is take a :bowdown: and a :qqb023:
    Awesome piece poet, you took it to the max!!
     
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    having three sons...

    ...i often wonder what it would have been like to raise a daughter...to help mold her into this wonderful woman that she would become. not having been blessed with that responsibility, i talk to my many nieces about BEING A WOMAN ALL THE TIME...not just when its convenient.

    THANKS for reading

    the river floweth
     
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