Black Poetry : "O" Baby "O"!

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  1. LovesDestiny

    LovesDestiny Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Locked in a jar, lid closed tight
    All boxed in, can’t see daylight
    Blood still running through my veins
    Gonna burst any second if I don’t loosen these chains!

    Years of pent up frustrations
    Got no way to release these daily irritations
    Sex on a regular but it ain’t all good
    Knockin’ it out the box like only I could

    Will my turn ever come or is this my destiny
    To never know what it feels like to be free
    For the dam to break and release these sensual iniquities
    Fire and desire rages inside of me

    I begin to think to myself that it could be worse
    I could be left standing without a voice or a verse
    To live life and never to know
    What it feels like to say “O” baby “O”!

    Anticipation of seeing the one that makes my heart skip
    Chocolate brown coated complexion coffee honey dip
    Day turns to night when he walks on the scene
    Got a sexy style striding that gangsta lean

    Taking my hand leading me down foreplay lane
    I reciprocate by driving him completely insane
    Caught up in the rapture and loving me like he’ll never see me again
    The blood rushes in reverse and back up to my brain

    What is this feeling, this sensation, this delight?
    Is it a seizure, convulsions or is my flame on full ignite?
    Trying to keep my cool but this love is like WHOA!
    Finally I let go and scream “O” baby “O”!!
     
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    Woman thou art loosed

    You got loose creativiely

    like Stella,

    In acapella


    :dance3:
     
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    Bustin back in a groove
    O" Baby O' what a sweet move
    free from da glist of da chain
    rockin from da top stayin insane
    I can now here ya callin my name
    ready to get loose from da flame

    U really took it there and back
    pushin deep wit no slack
    sound like a lady mack
    cause ya lovin is yep ignite
    that took us on this flyte
    roll it till morning day light
    ya destiny is alright
    u got this drop rap tyte .
    O" Baby O'
     
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    LovesDestiny Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you 1poetsought and Rich...sometimes you just gotta let it flow...lol!
     
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    um

    hang in there my sista

    what you seek is not out there

    it's inside of you

    now about the O baby O thing

    um that was fire

    fire

    loving the love

    peace
     
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    LovesDestiny Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yeah, DSS, looking for things in the wrong place can prolong what was in us all along!
     
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    Finally being able to release the passion that's been pent up for so long, whoa. Talk about a release... Feeling this vibe poetess.
     
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    Sister Hope,
    Love how this piece flows, you know how bring those verses whether they are highs or lows. When you flow you always leave folks wanting more.
    Love & Blessings,
    Drea
     
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    LovesDestiny Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you Sis Watz and Ms Drea! There's nothing better than to be FREE!!!
     
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    O WOW!! U got flowz like WHOA!! 'O baby O...' as we say over here in the UK(kk)...THAT IS THE LICK!!

    Sis, whatever we are each looking for is already looking for us, but we have to put ourselves where we'll receive it because it ain't gonna come in our house.

    Peace, Love, Light embrace U & yours!!
     
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