Black People : nuth'n ta do cept'n pray

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  1. Destee

    Destee destee.com STAFF

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    my friend can't be my friend no moe ... i shole miss her. i wanna go see 'bout her. she just live up the road awaze ... she got kids an' stuff, i love them chiren ... jes' like my own. jes' wanna check on 'em see if'n they alrite. last time i seen'd her, he wuz there ... she told me she got new friends now, don't need me no moe ... wit her arm wrapp'd roun' him ... like she dun wun a prize ... she shole iz proud, too proud i say ... look like having a man mean so much to her ... she alwaze been thata way ... Lawd now that chile luv her some man! ... <smiling> ... <sighing> ... anywaze ... i gotta respect what she said. i aint goin back over there ... less'n she 'vite me

    folk been talk'n doe ... say he beat'n on her again. whoop'n her e'ry day. what can i do ... nuth'n. i 'member last time he whoop'd her, when we wuz still friends an' stuff ... she came an' stay'd here wit me an' da chiren ... she heal'd up so nice ... got back fat an' fine ... my friend shole iz pretty ... but then he came back talk'n 'bout how sorry he was ... brung'd some new thangz for her an' da babies, toys an' such ... they wuz happy to see dey "daddy" ... dey all went home together ... he say she can't be my friend no moe ... folk say she rite poe look'n agin ... she shole used ta like my fried chicken an' tata salad ... Lawd now that chile shole kood eat when she want'd to! ... <smiling> ... <sighing> ... guess it's best for me to jest mine my bizness.

    i shole love my friend an' miss her ...
    i reck'n she know she kin 'pend on me if'n she need me ...

    nuth'n else i kin do

    cept'n pray

    :heart:

    Destee

    in observance of Domestic Abuse Awareness Month
    Thanks N2urSoul for giving me a reason to repost this peace.
     
  2. Twofish

    Twofish Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    destee - i appreciate this flow more than you know...and just the same, the way it is written is creative and adds to the appeal of the poem...4 stars :spinstar: :spinstar: :spinstar: :spinstar:

    1luv
    2fish
     
  3. serenti-poet

    serenti-poet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice Destee you posed it so beautifully gurl you put a blessin on us when you wrore this one :):):) jus givin luv u kno?
     
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    wow!!!!!
    destee u amaze me
    and i just love when u bless us dis way
     
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    Destees that was powerful poem...southern slang n all! One love keep the flow strong.
     
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    Destees that was a powerful poem...southern slang n all! One love keep the flow strong.
     
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    **** destee...
    i didn't even know
    you had skills like that...
    to me, reality makes the best poems
    dats a real scribe...real sad...at da same time real live

    peace...save me sum of that tata salad :)
    khasm
     
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    Can i get a, can i get a, can i get a (aalllriighhtt) amen sista!!! this is all that...AND a bag of chips...AND a deli sandwich. Totally feeling this Destee.

    Keep on keepin on!

    Holla Back!
     
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    Had to read this, when I saw your name attached to a poem!
    and I wasn't disappointed. If this is real, I pray for your friend, if not, I'm still moved by your skills. Peace!
     
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    wow! what a unique, Sad, beautifully expressed poem. Please bring us more! You got me caught between a smile and a tear.
     
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