Black Poetry : Nutcracker Sweet

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  1. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Volunteer armies are passing by
    Men and women continue to die
    In the war on mankind
    Nobody wants to fight

    Let peace come marching home again
    They'll draft your class
    Should aliens invade our land
    Alas, it's trashed

    Enemies are people too
    Bloody red on the battlefield
    Born to lose...
    Dying nutcracker sweet ~


    Darryl Abdu Omari :confused:
    aka 1poetsought ~ copyright 2004
     
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    True so true. But the powers must make the enemie into something hated. subhuman. Add the fear factor. Demonize them. You know how they do it.

    :bullseye: on point drop.
     
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    :terrific: :terrific: :terrific: :terrific: :terrific: :terrific: :terrific: :terrific: :terrific: :terrific: :terrific: :terrific: :terrific: :terrific: :terrific: NICE DROP
     
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    now that you words have been
    spoken, the final hours become
    the nights days of our
    daily continuous existance
    poet, your words spoken
    make the children of poetry's
    destiny complete...

    wow! that was amazing! keep doin what u do!!!!!

    this was beautifully written and well outspoken. i'm feelin it most definately.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    awesome brutha dis was on da head and real
    keep the truth flowing
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    As we honor veterans around the world say a little prayer for peace.
     
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    Those who are made out to be the enemy are somebody's children, somebody's father, somebody's somebody. Your words flow deeply.
     
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    AWESOME!!!!!!!!!
     
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    Continue to Serve your purpose well.
    Peace
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Everyday ~ ornamental soldiers are dying.

    Thank you all.
     
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