Black Poetry : Number Two

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  1. SwtT

    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Here I am again......
    Looking into someones eyes
    Heh, I will give him two months
    So that I won't be too surpirsed
    Dam, When will I learn?
    Last time didn't I cry enough?
    I cleaned out the drugstore for tissues
    Then, I tried to act all tough
    Like his leaving didn't effect me
    Like I had more boys than Skittles
    But he was my first love
    And after that, my heart was brittle
    Not brittle enough
    Because someone else is between my legs
    It's like that poem "Virginity's Sorrow
    But I made this ***** beg
    I fmessed with his mind
    I got him to say "love"
    I got alll the jewels and luxuries
    And he sticks to me like a glove
    It's aight though
    I'll be aight
    I made sure I don't love him
    But this wasn't supposed to happen tonight

    Matter of fact.......
    This wasn't supposed to happen at all
    I was gonna give him a kiss
    And then tell him later to call

    But I looked into his eyes
    And my hormones started to burn
    I looked into those hazels
    I don't know what to say
    It all happened so fast
    And my tummy started to churn
    We found our way to the bed
    He lifted me on that high
    I was actually moaning
    My head was flyin in the sky

    This wasn't supposed to happen
    Because this is how I fall
    If I tell him that I care for him
    He won't be around next fall
    I got chills in my back
    Tears streamin down my face
    Why did I allow this to happen?
    This man is in my personal space!
    I :shakes head: can just imagine now
    All the bullish he'll put me through...
    He'll be just like number one
    And this is Mr number two
     
  2. skrybe7

    skrybe7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    go 'head work it out, SwtT!
    Peace!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    tell it all but knowin won't let u fall
    number two like one
    stay focus sistah as u learn
    tyte scribeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!
     
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    SwtT... a one woman show!

    SwtT... a correspondence course regarding the society of women.

    SwtT... Sweeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeet!
     
  5. NADIA*BINTA

    NADIA*BINTA Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    heartfelt flow fa sho!... i feel ya :)

    peace
     
  6. SwtT

    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you everybody! :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave:
    1poet...that was so sweet! :heart:
     
  7. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    **** this was hot....and very emotional...i love it!
     
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    Rico Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    SWT SWT SWT, what can I say...this was a d*** good piece.
     
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