Black Poetry : number 100,000,000,001

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  1. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this, us, we
    are a work in progress

    you breathe, and I
    take notes on the
    symmetrical line of
    your back as your muscles
    expand and retract

    ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

    that you’ve inspired
    100,000,000,000
    of these love notes
    in a span of time
    that is but a drop in
    our forever ~

    excites my soul

    for

    in all my life, I’ve never….


    …and all the
    silent messages
    authored by your fingers
    the night you
    placed your palms
    upon my cheeks,
    positioned, peeled, parted,
    pierced my flesh
    and love oozed bright red

    have yet to be written

    yes ~ every word you said…

    that your heart knew
    who we’d be 2
    1
    another even before
    our eyes could see

    renders my tongue
    still tied to the moments
    we entered
    eternity


    baby

    if my pen should
    stammer, and my
    thoughts should
    stutter….
    if I freeze in mid-stroke
    what I need to utter

    just open me
    that beautiful way you do

    read my endless pages
    on loving you


    alyce, 2001
     
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    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    One word


    B(you)tiful. Thank you queen.

    one love,blak
     
  3. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sing the Song ...

    Sustah A~ I hear the percussions playing loudly
    as you sing this tune over the
    notes accompanied by the horn section
    in a rhythmless pit of love!

    ~Serenadeablakman2deathandthenbringhimbacktolife~

    One luv....sustah!
     
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    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ms. A

    this be one cool read sis
     
  5. mojo

    mojo Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    alyce

    just one piece dedicated to me would satisfy (somewhat) for the rest of my life, yo.

    love this one 2!

    mojo
     
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    wildflower7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    alyce...
    this love song (note)
    is similar to the fullness
    i feel when i stare
    at my husband
    while he sleeps...
    thank you.
    -7 :spinstar:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    ALYCE

    ONCE AGAIN U HAVE PAINTED
    A PICTURE OF GREAT BEAUTY
    LACED IN SUPER ESSENCE OF
    U MY QUEEN ........THANX SIS.!:toast:
     
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    GYPSYMAN Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    silent and reading again...and again

    alyce....i always am compelled and seduced into reading your pictures over and over ....you tame words with an unusual sense of compassion...and you do it so exceedingly well.

    forever your student

    On A Continuous Journey
    GYPSYMAN
     
  9. MzNappi

    MzNappi Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    **** u r a talented woman
    yo pen screams!!!

    yo words are action within themselves
    they hold the emotion of the writer and the intention of the reader

    mystical ****!!!!

    loving it
     
  10. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    poets

    thank you. But it's really all about him.

    a
     
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