Black Poetry : Nude vs Nekked

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by complexbrother, Apr 17, 2006.

  1. complexbrother

    complexbrother Member MEMBER

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    Nude Vs Nekked ...

    get to know someone ...

    And I swear I would cry if you were to ever touch me sincerely

    And I swear I would die if you were to ever make love to me and mean it whole-heartedly

    and the things I would do for just one night of purity,god,why does life have to be so lonely?

    Why are people so afraid everytime you try to hold them or get to know them?

    Why do I always shut off everytime people try to get close to me?

    Why am I so afraid of Reality?

    Maybe its because people seem to come & go...

    Where have the people gone that I met one year ago?

    on buses on trains always an unfamiliar face..too shy..too afraid...

    Maybe we are made to believe that if we open up to people
    they will eventually tear us apart, starting from the heart,

    and we will break down like the doors of a rich man's house,

    and they will rob us of everything that holds us together,

    the things that will someday tear us apart.

    When will we realize people are just people,

    like you or like me, we are all equal.

    But it seems so much easier to take your clothes off
    in front of someone than it is to try to get to know them....
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    hummmmm!
    to be naked is uncloth but to view one nude is seening the inner whole
    i guess sometime getting to know one have measures
    nice drop of an question
     
  3. GHETTOAMBITION

    GHETTOAMBITION Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    danggggg..yo i was really feelin dat drop
    i mean dats how i feel sumtmes
    so flo on wit nonstop
    frum yo sistah G.A


    BLACKLUV AND BP
     
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    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    love the way you put it down on this flo poet flo on.:welldone:
     
  5. asimplepoet

    asimplepoet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I was really feeling this cuz
     
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