Black Poetry : nubian princess verse 2 [from the BrownShugaShane lp]

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  1. Sha'iyn

    Sha'iyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i'll do whatever it takes to make you mines girl
    whether diamonds and pearls shinin'
    remarkable rhymin' with words

    or quality time.. driving Benzes his and hers
    carats to make you shiver
    a pair of chinchilla furs

    the most expensive places where dinner is served
    like laying naked in Tahiti while we eatin' hor d'ourves

    shoes, belts and purses with the Gucci collages
    squeeze berries and juices on your body
    'cause you're a hottie

    when you're beside me,
    i'm hot as the Mojave
    temperature's risin' with your thighs around me

    imma young prince
    i want a princess to ride with
    and take me to Atlantis like Ron Isley

    down for your crown and I knew you eversince
    pretty, brown, round never-a-frown my...
    Nubian Princess

    nubian princess, would you be mine
    with your.. beautiful skin and your beautiful mind I...
    cherish your body and your quality time
    would you be my brown shuga?
    :kiss1:
     
  2. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    this piece is hot

    money don't buy love is buys sex

    and most women (hey i said most ok ok )

    some women wouldn't give you time of day if you don't have certain "stuff"

    any female that you feel you wanna holla at should feel you for you

    not for what you have

    because will they still love you when your "stuff" is gone?

    good question

    so yes POET get yours while you can

    and if it ain't love then say it ain't love

    feelin' me

    because what happens when you can't go to the expensive places to eat

    and then you suggest white castles?

    what happens then?

    lol

    peace poet

    just don't miscontrue lovin' you and lovin' what you got (have)
     
  3. Sha'iyn

    Sha'iyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    why?

    why do fools fall in love?

    i'm feelin' like Frankie Lymon on this one

    this poem is for most women. maybe they need poetic brothas like us who wanna give them fine things but, always end up taking them to he "castle" lol
    i am a get-money individual and i do like wooing women but, i understand you on this one, street. money can't buy true emotion only produce false energy (the worst kind)
    :hearts3:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    word up ! nothing wrong with wooing women but being real and true
    brings another page to the story ....feeling you here still
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Well, first of all, your rhymes and word play are off the hook as usual. And when you find someone you adore, you do want to lavish them, as much as you can. I do see what So'ja is saying also, fortunes can be lost, looks fade, and what is left is the essence that is you. Anywho, tight write.
     
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