Black Poetry : nubian princess (revisited)

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  1. Sha'iyn

    Sha'iyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I need your chocolate kisses from provocative lips
    and your hypnotic hips
    got me watching you switch
    i wonder WHY they call you a *****
    center my time around you
    and not the watch on my wrist

    the sparkle in your eyes
    startles the skies
    you keep my heart on fire
    so, i don't need to get high

    my art is alive when i'm typing these words
    when i'm discouraged with bad nerves
    serenity you serve

    more than me you may deserve
    with your brains and curves
    but, i'm..
    ready to have 1st, 2nds, and 3rds

    love making, making love
    the bees and the birds
    at home or on the phone
    do not disturb

    please! give me the word
    for now, it's a dream
    if our chemistry is firm
    i will make you my queen

    Nubian Princess would you be mine
    with your.. beautiful skin and your beautiful mind I... cherish your body and your quality time
    would you be my brown shuga?

    Sha'iyn a.k.a. Brown Shuga Shane
     
  2. Yemoja'sGoddess

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    Well Now

    And he does it again...:great:

    Great Write Poet! She's a very lucky woman, if she knows what's good, she'll adhere to your request, lol.

    Flow on Poet... Keep On...:spinn:

    (Got me wanna get back up in here and post some poetics)
     
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    This was sweetly serene, poet. Very much enjoyed.
     
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    ****...

    Wow, I have to say that once again I am really impressed by your style. So you have range...that's good. Makes me anxious to read more of your work. Great job...and lucky lady to have such beautiful words written about her.
     
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    Sha'iyn:

    Its oh so lovely:)


    Much luv
     
  6. Sha'iyn

    Sha'iyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wifey material

    all of you nubian women are wifey material and i have'nt even met you all personally. the way i know is because of your appreciation for strong words from strong minds which makes a strong body and a strong bond. i'm forever lovin' your spirits. be healthy, shuga shane!
     
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    Wow...man...just wow! I loved every word written. Nice strokes with your pen.

    April
     
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    Anyone who can laid lines from the heart like this, is indeep a king worth his words:bowdown:
    It surely got my attention poet, as I'm sure it put a charge in her heart.
     
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