Black Poetry : Nuances

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  1. klabarron

    klabarron Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Light dances from the glow of her smile
    gently blinding me, drawing my eyes to her glow
    silhouetted, shadowed, countenance
    full of life and beauty
    crowned with the wisdom of age
    yet milked with youthful vigor
    i am drawn to her light.

    in hues of yellow
    i come to know her light, aglow
    as she shares hues of joy
    radiating from a depth so deep
    that intimacy measures
    light years as i travel into her.
    i desire her light


    purple hues of passion
    flow freely from her erotic essence
    taking captive my very soul
    causing passion to swell
    inside to gothic grandeur
    as i loose self to hues of her
    i am engulfed by her light.


    radiant reds roust
    intensity in motion
    as we thrust one into the other
    in unbridled artistry
    creating kinetic hues
    measured in decibels
    screams to the tops
    of our lungs
    as a kaleidoscope of color
    invades our vision
    and rainbow dance a dance
    to the nuances of her light


    our passion
    our love.
    she?...
    we are light.
     
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    LiLi Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    simply beautiful...
     
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    Dis piece is very touching. I can flyin colors already. It's like a fireworks type of scene. I'm likin it Klabarron.

    Aaliyahmonet:)
     
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    klabarron Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks my Sistas!! Much Love 2 U!
     
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    OWIEEEEEEEE klabarron

    i liked the way you describe " her " in youre poem!

    OWIEEEEEEEE

    "let there be light'' "let there be light'

    loved it liberty laida
     
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    klabarron Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    bet my sista!
     
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    Beautiful!K Simply Beautiful!
     
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    I love the colors of this piece, your feelings about "her" come shinning through. You expressed your love for her, so beautifully.
     
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    klabarron Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks much FAM! She is badddddddddddd!!! As most of my SISTAS are.
     
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